The Taking: Part 3

[kosmickway]

Profiler: The Taking, Part 3
Rating: R for violence, sexuality, salty language.
Pairing: Grace/George friendship; Grace/Bailey; some Goat; mostly VCTF friendship.
Fandoms: This is my first cross-over with “Bones.” Temperance Brennance, Seeley Booth, Zack Addey, Jack Hodgins, Camille Saroyan, Angela Montenegro, the Grave Digger, and Gormogon are all

Comments

[m_ravensblood]

I really hope you update soon. This story has so much tension that it's really hard to have a part end and not be able to go on! I love the way you've integrated the Bones characters, I think you're doing a great job of it. Excellent job and looking forward to reading more :D

[kosmickway]

Thank you SO much! I'm so glad that you're enjoying it and want to see more. I'm working on part 4 even as we speak! Thanks for the kind words!

[empty_marrow]

So wonderful! I love the tension between Grace and Bailey, and I'm seriously fangirling Brennan and her geeky efficiency. ;)

One quick question/quibble (whoa, alliteration!)- at the end of part two the killer wanted 4M in uncut diamonds and in this scene they're wiring 2M in cash - you just might want to fix that for the final version. :) Can't wait for part four!

[kosmickway]

oh, good catch! yeah, I went back and watched the original "Bones" ep and took the phrasing from the Grave Diggers call. The whole uncut diamonds thing seemed a little too far fetched.

Thanks for pointing it out.

As to Brennan-- man, I've got a scene where she and Grace are discussing faith and what it is and isn't. Hopefully you'll enjoy that.

[serialbathera]

great next chapter :)