Comments | profiler_fans: The Taking, Part 2

kosmickway in profiler_fans

The Taking, Part 2

Mar 13, 2008 19:08

It's been so long since I posted part one of this story that I'm just going to repost it here again. (And it's been so dead here that I don't know if anyone is reading it. But here it is all the same ( Read more... )

crossovers, bailey/grace, fanfic, george/grace, kosmickway

Comments 6

m_ravensblood March 14 2008, 20:47:50 UTC

I like the flow between Morgan and Grace with all the things that have transpired in their past and having to deal with such a horrible situation, it's very well executed. The build up of tension is really good and EEP! cliffhanger place to stop! Hope you'll continue soon!

Small moderator note, please see Rule 6.

kosmickway March 14 2008, 22:10:39 UTC

Oops, my bad. Sorry about that. It's been so long since I posted anything I forgot the rules ;) Won't happen again.

Thanks for the comment!

skewed_believer March 15 2008, 00:00:42 UTC

Ohhh. =D
I hope you update soon.

empty_marrow March 15 2008, 17:55:18 UTC

OK, I'm late to the party again, but anyway...*SQUEES*

This is wonderful! You do some of the very best crime-scene and police work details. I love the way you keep your characters rounded, too - you even got me feeling a little sorry for asshole!Morgan when he redeemed himself in the last scene. Also, I've never seen more than a few snippets of "Bones," but I think you got their voices and mannerisms perfectly. And you're making me want to get into another show. Dammit. ;)

Can't wait for the next part!

kosmickway March 15 2008, 21:15:55 UTC

*flattered*

thanks so much, sweetie! it's comments like this that make me want to keep writing! you're amazing! thanks for brightening my day AND helping me keep my faith in this story.

*huggles*

serialbathera March 18 2008, 17:25:34 UTC

what a wonderful next part