New Fan Fiction: The Loss

[kosmickway]

Title: The Loss, Part 1
Author: kosmickway
Rating: PG
Pairing: George/Grace, though less romantic and more unconditional love.
Summary: This is an alternate end to the fourth-season episode “Tsuris.” It basically focuses on how the team would have responded if Grace had lost the baby. This also ties in with the "Bringing Up Baby" challenge at skewedbelievers.

Comments

[velvetwhip]

This is really affecting. Great job!

Gabrielle

[kosmickway]

i had trouble getting part 2 to measure up after overhauling part 1 into what you see here. i still don't feel like part 2 is the best that it could be but i'm simply not sure how to give it the sense of urgency that part 1 has or the grief of part 3. suggestions would be welcomed if you have any.

[velvetwhip]

I have NO familiarity with Season Four. I'm sorry. If it helps, I certainly think that Part two is strong enough that Parts One and Three more than make up for any of its weaknesses.

Gabrielle

[m_ravensblood]

Very vivid and emotional! Heading on to read the other parts.