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Fic: Laugh, I Almost Died (Secret Santa Gift for fishpwnsyou)

Dec 23, 2005 23:45

Skating in just before the deadline! Here's your Secret Santa gift, fishpwnsyou; it's posted at the Profiler fic archive since LJ would've made me post it in four parts. Hope you enjoy it!

Title: Laugh, I Almost DiedCharacters/Pairings: Cast; Frannie/John, Rachel/John ( Read more... )

secret santa 2005, fanfic, sinaddict, john/frances, john/rachel

Comments 11

gelosia December 24 2005, 09:59:05 UTC

That was some very good writing.

sinaddict December 25 2005, 04:07:37 UTC

Thank you! :)

m_ravensblood December 24 2005, 22:04:51 UTC

Great piece, I like how you incorporated Jack in :D

sinaddict December 25 2005, 04:08:03 UTC

Thanks! I was so nervous about incorporating Jack since I'd never written him before, though.

m_ravensblood December 25 2005, 04:12:15 UTC

You're welcome to try and write all the Jack you wish ;) Robin and I would love it if you walked towards the blue light ;)

fishpwnsyou December 26 2005, 15:50:55 UTC

Juliette,

This is some really amazing work!! I just LOVE your writing style so much, and this fic was witty, clever, and enjoyable! (Mmm... Jensen Ackles. I assume you know him like I do from Smallville, but I am also a Supernatural fan. ;)

One of my favorite John/Franny moments:
Opens the door, and John's leaning casually in the doorway, looking like something out of GQ. And this is just so not fucking fair, because she's stupid right now and he's taking advantage of it.

Thank you so much for this fic! I just LOVE the way you write the show, the characters - especially Franny! She is so lovable no matter what kind of trouble she's getting into. I also love how you would reference back to scenes in the show throughout the fic. I have been meaning to read Dysphemism but haven't had the time. Will definately go back and do that.

And a word to Francis: We all fall for John. ;)

:P

Merry Christmas!

sinaddict December 27 2005, 08:09:23 UTC

Aww, I'm so glad you liked it! I actually saw Supernatural before I saw Jensen on Smallville; I just started Smallville like a month ago, and just got up to season four two weeks ago.

Thanks!

empty_marrow December 26 2005, 21:24:24 UTC

*SQUEE*

OK, I'm getting a vicarious-present thrill here. ;) You can't believe how excited I was to get into a spot in the airport this morning where there was actually functioning WiFi access so I could sit and read this whole thing.

First off, your Frances just kicks major ass -- she's perfectly imperfect, you have her voice down cold, and she's an amazingly fleshed-out character. Same with John, Rachel, Sam, Bailey -- I can hear them say the dialog because everything just fits. And congratulations on making Rachel such a crucial character and not just Sam, part 2.

Also, although I love the hotness of Frannie/John, you made me totally crazy-in-love with Bobby and totally adoring over Arianna, and it's a rare fic where I fall harder for the non-canon characters. :)

Wonderful writing as always and I really hope you do more Frannie!fic. **And sexy Frannie/Jack banter and Jack calling her Fran OMG you rock my socks!**

sinaddict December 27 2005, 09:12:44 UTC

Thanks so much! And you know, it's funny you mention loving Bobby so much -- my other beta/hand-holder begged me to write a Frannie/Bobby fic for her because she loved them so much. Good to know I can come up with a good original character!

So, so glad you enjoyed this! I definitely have plans for more Frannie fic, too. :)

serialbathera December 29 2005, 20:23:50 UTC

Very nicely crafted story, you did a wonderful job :)

sinaddict January 4 2006, 06:46:55 UTC

Thank you!