PROFILER: Getting Personal: Chapters 1 through 5
devilwrites told me I should post my story next time I updated it on here, too.
Title: Getting Personal
Rating PG-13
Setting: Five years after the VCTF's demise in 2000, therefore year 2005.
Status: Incomplete
Published: July 21, 2004
Summary: Five long years after the VCTF's demise John gets a phone call from Bailey Malone. John is told the VCTF is ( Read more... )
Title: Getting Personal
Rating PG-13
Setting: Five years after the VCTF's demise in 2000, therefore year 2005.
Status: Incomplete
Published: July 21, 2004
Summary: Five long years after the VCTF's demise John gets a phone call from Bailey Malone. John is told the VCTF is ( Read more... )
Comments 5
i do think that you may have missed an opportunity for rachel and john to bond by skipping over the repurcussions of nathan's death. there's a lot of emotional resonance for john in his friendship with nathan and i think that if you show john being emotional you're going to give rachel more of a chance to reach out to john and for him to accept the help she offers. and that will ultimately lead to some great moments for them. just a thought. i'm a john/rachel fan, too.
(PS-- if you have Season 4 on DVD, watch Clifton Campbell's commentary for "On Your Marks." He talks a lot about the direction he wanted ?John's character to go in Season 5 of Profiler and what he was planning to do with John and Rachel as a couple)
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Hell, I don't even have S3 dvds yet, let alone S4... *pouts*
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And don't worry, Nathan's funeral will be in the chapter I'm writing now. :)
And thanks for the tip, I didn't really feel like watching it because it wasn't someone I had known of too well. I'll go watch it as soon as I'm done.
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