Newbie's hello and my take on Iris~Shiawase no Hako

[irrana]

Hi there!
Just finished the Diabolical box game and I couldn't help crying over the instrumental.
Kinda knew they had the Japanese vocals stuffed somewhere so I went about looking for it.
It was good... but I didn't know what the singer was trying to convey.
Like my Japanese is very very bad.... ><;

So here's my take on Iris~Shiawase no Hako if anyone

Comments

[niko_plus]

That's really sweet lyrics there. Yesterday I sang to myself a song using the Jikan Ryokou, and it turned out to be pretty good ^^. Anyways, WELCOME TO THE COMMUNITY, IRRANA!

[irrana]

*huggles* thank you

[kirschwassers]

ahhhh oh gosh slightly off-topic but i'm really glad to see this here; i love salyu's music ;A;

[irrana]

thanks ^^

[v_vii]

Ahh how lovely! I like your lyrics, I like them a lot o/ Some lines didn't.. make sense/flow well though, e.g. "Embraced beside each other arms", but other than that, you did well :-)!

As a side note, because this kind of post is long, could you edit it so that the lyrics are under a cut?

[v_vii]

Also, welcome to the community! :-)

[irrana]

Thank you so so much~!

Curious: How do I do an LJ cut?

[v_vii]

http://www.livejournal.com/support/faqbrowse.bml?faqid=75

or

http://net33.us/ljcut.htm

for help on how to make cuts!

[irrana]

*huggles*

Thanks and do try it out!
Let me know what you think needs fixing/tweaking and I'd try changing the parts ^^

singing those lyrics...

[glowball001]

I have been working on singing those lyrics. they are truly beautiful although, I did have to cut out some lyrics because it was a bit of a mouthful trying to sing them. I'm going to post a video of me singing the lyrics on youtube if anybody's interested. my youtube username is glowball001.

Thank you again for putting together those lyrics and I'm sorry if my voice doesn't do your lyrics justice but I've tried my best and I haven't seen anyone else attempt to.