Request Sixteen - misumisu84

Nov 20, 2008 17:09


Title : Ice cream and Festivals
Rating : PG
Prompt : Spoiled from misumisu84 
Word count : 1511
Characters : Byakuya x Renji (with the SWA cameo-ing)
Disclaimer : Still no owning is mine....

This story was beta'd by vayshti who I am eternally grateful to for re-reading and editing many time....

Ice Cream and Festivals

Kuchiki Byakuya hated having the Shinigami Women’s ( Read more... )

fan fiction, renji, request, bleach, byakuya

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vayshti November 20 2008, 17:24:26 UTC
*cries*

the formatting has gone wonky - I cannae read it again yet!!

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prof_ryoki November 20 2008, 17:34:52 UTC
Huh? What? I don't understand....

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vayshti November 20 2008, 17:53:48 UTC
You lost your paragraph breaks when you posted - it makes it difficult to read.

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prof_ryoki November 20 2008, 17:59:34 UTC
Really, it's showing up as having paragraphs on my computer...?

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freyalilith November 20 2008, 18:50:46 UTC
*giggles* That was hilarious! And just so adorable, poor Renji, is it awful that I like it when he cries? Hehe.

I just love your writing, its always so awsome (I'm not a writer myself so I can't come up with fancy words to explain it). Havnt been posting comments lately cause I'm a lazy arse, but have read all your recent fics, and loved them all!!! Thank you!!!!!

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prof_ryoki November 21 2008, 08:43:25 UTC
Thanks, any comments are appreciated (especially ones as nice as this....) and I'm glad you enjoyed them

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mako_pretty November 20 2008, 21:01:54 UTC
That's awesome! I had a completely different idea for this prompt than what you wrote, and I like your take on it much better than mine! The end is awesome, I can really see it! And as usual, your characterizations blows most fics right out of the water. Fabulous work. Thank you so much for writing this!

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prof_ryoki November 21 2008, 08:44:07 UTC
WOOT! You liked it, I'm sooooooo happy :D

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mako_pretty November 21 2008, 12:51:15 UTC
How could I not like it? It's was perfect! *beams and reads it again*

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prof_ryoki November 21 2008, 12:52:52 UTC
Really? I am soooo relieved, I'm always worried the people the prompts were for won't like them... stupid head not writing good stories :(

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wintaerland November 21 2008, 00:25:25 UTC
Byakuya splattered with ice cream *chuckles*

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prof_ryoki November 21 2008, 08:44:25 UTC
Yeah baby, on his scarf too :P

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prof_ryoki November 21 2008, 12:59:45 UTC
Perhaps I will do a sequel if a prompt fits it....we'll see

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