CSI: NY--FIC:Terrible Horrible No Good Very Bad Day! (Flack-Stella-Lindsay friendship) PG13
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So first things first I guess- This is unbetaed! If someone wants to beta this *cool beans* if ya'll just wanna let me know if there are any fuck-ups that's cool too. Also just a quick mention here this is my first CSI: NY fic ever.
Title: Terrible Horrible No Good Very Bad Day!
Rating: PG13 (For Flack's potty mouth)
Fandom: CSI: New York
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So first things first I guess- This is unbetaed! If someone wants to beta this *cool beans* if ya'll just wanna let me know if there are any fuck-ups that's cool too. Also just a quick mention here this is my first CSI: NY fic ever.
Title: Terrible Horrible No Good Very Bad Day!
Rating: PG13 (For Flack's potty mouth)
Fandom: CSI: New York
( Read more... )
Comments 2
Quick and dirty beta? According to IMDB, it's "Lindsay," not "Lindsey." If someone is talking to someone else and says their name, a comma goes before the name. “You don’t need to say you’re sorry, Flack."
I had to wait like a til my brother got off nightshift... This... makes no sense. I think you've got an extra "a like" in there.
“Whoa, hold on Flack.” Stella said approaching him, “Let me try and get this tie off. Should be a comma after "Flack" rather than a period.
it didn’t matter that I call... Should be "called."
He held up his right hand so they could see a large bandage on the palm of his hand and because it was wet you could tell how much it must’ve bleed earlier. Delete the "of his hand;" you don't need it. Comma after "palm ( ... )
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