Firefly Fic: What Will Be and What Is

[prlrocks]

Title: What Will Be and What Is
Rating: PG-13 (though there is cursing in Chinese)
Pairing: Jayne/River
Words: 4,600
Timeline: Post BDM
Betas: I’m highly indebted to both ru_salki99 and an_ardent_rain for their help on this. With out their feedback I don’t know what I would have done!
Prompts: Song in his heart, Misplaced, Smirk, Games, Salt shaker, Icky feeling in the

Comments

[duh_i_read]

Wow. You got Jayne's voice down.

I love River's steady, persistent perusal of Jayne. Oh and my favorite line? “The seven deadly trials of River Tam. When I reach the end, I will get my reward.”

=shiver=

[prlrocks]

Thank you! I'm so pleased people think I did well with Jayne. :D

[idyllictorture]

I thought this was great. Especially for a first time Rayne/Firefly fic. I loved their sweet interactions, without either one being OOC.

[prlrocks]

Thank you!

And I LOVE that icon. So much so that tomorrow I will be checking out that other icons that person has to offer. :D

[fabledfigment]

Better than okay, honey, this was priceless. I hope you realize you have six fics to go to finish your series (hint hint)

[prlrocks]

Thank you! Given how much I adore your writing, it's beyond lovely to hear you liked it!!

I'm starting to gather ideas for a sequel. :) I get need to form all those ideas into some sort of solid plot.

[onebrightmoment]

wonderful!

you've done a very good River i think. love that the story ends with their beginning. the dialogue is really good too.

[prlrocks]

Thanks! I think my River here was far better then that other fic I just wrote. Still, I'm still trying to get use to her. Jayne I'm starting to feel comfotable with.

[infinite_whimsy]

Aww! They're sweet. I've always wondered, though - how does everyone determine how to spell out chinese phonetically? And sometimes there are new phrases that I haven't seen from fic to fic... did you make up any?

Also, spot on with Jayne's voice. His accent is just so tricky to pin down. Does Zoe know or approve?

[prlrocks]

Sorry it took so long to get back to you.

I didn't make any up. A friend and firefly fanfic writer was kind enough to be me a rather long list of terms that I could use. It's helped me bunches.

Zoe, likely has an idea. I suppose I'll make the yes or no of that solid once I start the sequel.

Thank you for reviewing!!