Comments | pristineungift: Into the Breach

pristineungift

Into the Breach

Nov 08, 2010 18:54

Written for the Crossover Challenge on legendland . What happens when magic goes awry and a Mord'Sith is set loose inside the Ministry of Magic? It feels a little rushed to me, but it was perilously close to the word limit. Harry Potter/Legend of the Seeker

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!crossover, hp character: lucius malfoy, comm: legendland, hp character: hermione granger, lots character: darken rahl, !fanfiction, !drabble/oneshot, fandom: harry potter, lots character: zeddicus zu'l zorander, hp character: luna lovegood, fandom: legend of the seeker, lots character: cara, hp character: harry potter, !challenge

Comments 18

melt_in2_me November 9 2010, 01:14:27 UTC

Love all the Wizards and Witches throwing their best at her and Cara is all just pft... *hand*.
I like the Crucio in a stick. lol
Wouldn't Lucius be in heaven if he could get control of his own army of Mord'Sith. Obliviating him was a good idea.

pristineungift December 14 2010, 22:56:29 UTC

I actually kind of imagine book!Darken as looking like the Lucius actor from the movies... so yeah. Thar you go. >_>

Thanks for reading!

melt_in2_me December 15 2010, 00:55:20 UTC

Me too! That's exactly how they described him.

jesterlady November 9 2010, 02:00:23 UTC

I seriously would love to see Cara taking down legions of wizards. It's hilarious! Poor Lucius. He really is not match for Rahl!

melt_in2_me November 9 2010, 02:24:08 UTC

But wouldn't you love to see them get together and compare hair care tips?

jesterlady November 9 2010, 05:04:32 UTC

Oh, the glory of such a thing! :)

pristineungift December 14 2010, 22:58:03 UTC

Thread 5

violatrixstone November 9 2010, 06:01:55 UTC

Cara is BAMS nothing beats her :P

pristineungift December 14 2010, 23:05:49 UTC

Thanks bb!

confessorlove November 9 2010, 09:59:22 UTC

ZOMG This is AWEOSME!!! I can only imagine what would have happened if Cara and Lucious had teamed up. And poor Harry getting killed and the being all "Tell no one about this." I love this and I normally don't like crossovers so this is epic.

pristineungift December 14 2010, 23:07:06 UTC

Thanks! I'm not normally into crossovers either, so this was challenging for me. :)

hrhrionastar November 9 2010, 22:50:15 UTC

Love, love, love this! OMG!

Cara's whole attitude, the nonplussed Harry and Hermione, Cara being unimpressed with Lucius Malfoy, Cara deflecting the Killing Curse, and then giving Harry the Breath of Life--and I LOVE the part at the end where she's so relieved to get back to the appropriately dangerous Rahl--this is hilariously wonderful!

brontefanatic November 10 2010, 03:17:06 UTC

Everything Riona said. This was hilariously wonderful indeed. I really need to get more familiar with the whole Potter-verse. I still know enough about everybody to enjoy it. This story might be enough to push me into that world.

I feel so out of the loop this week. Need to get back sooon.

pristineungift December 14 2010, 23:08:53 UTC

That's a huge compliment, thank you! :D

pristineungift December 14 2010, 23:08:17 UTC

Thanks so much, bb! Glad you liked it :D