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pristineungift

The Song of Rhaego Fireborn (2/2) COMPLETE

Oct 09, 2011 11:32

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Comments 21

dm999 October 9 2011, 18:06:13 UTC

What a great story, so sad to see it coming to an end.

Will you write more of it?

Thanks

pristineungift October 13 2011, 15:52:34 UTC

I may write The Stanza of Ice eventually. Right now though I have other projects I need to complete first. <3

Glad you enjoyed it and thank you for commenting!

meridian_rose October 9 2011, 18:42:36 UTC

I loved beta-ing this. Such a great story :D

I love your Dany, both her thought processes and heroic actions, and how Jorah understands that Drogo isn't a savage but a keen minded man who just sees the world differently. Tryion slapping Joffrey will never get old :D Rhaego's triumph as he claims the throne is a wonderful ending to this part of his saga.

pristineungift October 13 2011, 15:53:45 UTC

And I loved having you beta!

I really mean it - you definitely make this story a lot better! Especially by pushing me to include the Lannister scene. Because. Joffrey slapping is always good. XD

Thanks for commenting. :3

missisjoker October 10 2011, 05:50:38 UTC

aww, awesome!!!
I want to read the second part!!
too bad in the series -and in the book- we didn't get a chance to see Rhaego....
but still, I would love to read a continuation...especially featuring Arya ....

pristineungift October 13 2011, 16:05:55 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

And you've completely read my mind - if I ever get around to writing The Stanza of Ice, the plot outline and notes I have for it heavily feature Arya. ^_~

Thank you for commenting. <3

fancies_of_fae October 10 2011, 06:06:16 UTC

You've captured the characters very well!

pristineungift October 13 2011, 16:06:17 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it and thank you for commenting. <3

eiko82 October 10 2011, 06:09:00 UTC

Best Dany/Drogo story ever!!!! I wish that there was more.

You totally nailed all the characters. I'm glad that Mirri Maz Duur was still up to her evil ways in your story. And yay for Rhaego getting the Iron Throne :)

pristineungift October 13 2011, 16:07:43 UTC

Aww thank you so much!

I wouldn't classify Mirri as evil really. Like all characters in GoT, she's just got her own agenda going on. ^_~

I may eventually write The Stanza of Ice, I just need to finish some other projects first. :)

Thank you for commenting. <3