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dm999 October 3 2011, 03:03:50 UTC
Finally I read a story about Khal Drogo and Danny and what a story.

I like were you are going, please update soon.

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pristineungift October 3 2011, 12:05:40 UTC
Glad you liked it! Part II will be ready in a few days. Thank you for taking the time to review. <3

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philstar22 October 3 2011, 03:10:40 UTC
Pris! How did I not know you were in this fandom too? This was amazing. I so wish this is what had happened, and I can't wait to see what you write next.

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pristineungift October 3 2011, 12:05:02 UTC
Probably because I literally joined this fandom a week ago. I watched the last episode of S1 on Friday. XD

This fic is pretty much me making it hurt a little less. T_T

Glad you liked it. <3

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meridian_rose October 3 2011, 06:58:09 UTC
You've got the characters wonderfully, especially both Drogo and Jorah's love and respect for Dany, though they're coming from very different places their affections for her. Fierce Dany is fantastic.
I wish this was how it had played out.

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pristineungift October 3 2011, 12:03:33 UTC
Me too! How it actually went just gutted me, really.

Thanks for reviewing bb, especially as you beta'd. :3 I'm glad you liked it!

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pristineungift October 4 2011, 18:30:07 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and took the time to comment. The next part will be out in a few days. It just needs a little editing. <3

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pearlessence October 3 2011, 20:43:44 UTC
This is a joy to read. You captured one of my favorite things in the ASOIAF fandom (and consequently the HBO series) - the relationship between Daenerys and Drogo. You've captured so much of what makes them special in this story, and you've brought in Rhaego! I'm sure every reader has wondered about him, about the stallion-dragon that should have lived. Thanks for sharing! I can't wait to read part II!

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pristineungift October 4 2011, 18:31:07 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and took the time to comment. The next part will be out in a few days. It just needs a little editing. <3

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