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Seven 6/7: Depression

Jul 16, 2009 11:36

Characters: Michael, mentions of Sara, original characters.
Chapter: 6: Depression
Length: 2000 words
Genre: AU, drama, reflective, post-series, sadness.
Rating: pg-15 (language, adult concepts)
Summary: A lot can happen in four years...
A/N: This is the alternative POV chapter to wrldpossibility’s Seven. Thanks to co-writers, linzi20 and wrldpossibility, and to lauratnz for the beautiful ( Read more... )

post series, sara, sadness, rosie_spleen, pg, angst, michael, kellerman, wrldpossibility, seven

Comments 4

lizparker6 July 16 2009, 21:41:36 UTC

Lol, why is it always prague??:))) Hehe, its just really funny, its like the only town in central europe known to outside-earopeans..lol.:)

Anyway, I love your writing rosie, you know I do, but you and amy are completely overbeating yourself with this story. I love every line in it, and that pea remark? Gosh, that almost sent me over the edge.

I love you for writting this, and I absolutely love the double writting where we get to see saras as well as michaels side.

Poor dear, it must be so hard to just look at those photos, have nothing else in your hands than memories or dreams, knowing your son from nothing more than pictures when you know he is out there, somewhere, close and yet unreachable.

I wonder if michael got a picture of sara and her cut hair, hmm, wonder what he would have said to that...;))))

Anyway, love it rosie, you know i do, so no need to repeat myself over and over again.

*hugs you tight*

rosie_spleen July 17 2009, 00:35:52 UTC

Hello m'dear, LOL about Prague. I guess it is like a stereotype city to use when one wants international mystery and espionage - it's ridiculous really. *makes note to self to be more 'creative'*

Thanks for reading this, liz. I know it aint easy, and it's certainly not easy to write at times - although it is ALWAYS a wonderful challenge, and contrasting Amy's POV is really good fun.

I doubt Michael got a pic of Sara's hair cut, lady. lol. Kellerman would have protected him from such a travesty.

Hope you are well, Liz, and your study is going nicely.

jaded_chord July 19 2009, 19:47:10 UTC

I loved how that line about "giving up" (and how Michael's favourite vegetable was peas) paralleled Sara's POV (particularly since I just read the chapters one after the other).

Fantastic chapter as always. Definitely looking forward to the next!

rosie_spleen July 19 2009, 23:41:56 UTC

Hello there!

The paralleling with wrldpossibility's chapters has been the most exciting challenge, so I'm glad the peas and 'giving up' references worked, so thanks heaps for that. I hope you like the next chapter too - it will be the end of the 'grieving' process writing for me, but you can expect an 'afterward' epilogue (perhaps a couple of chapters) from our cowriter linzi20. I think she will post them here too.

Thanks for reading and your supportive words. they mean a lot : D