Seven 5/7: Anger

Jul 08, 2009 15:14

Characters: Michael, mentions of Sara, original characters.
Chapter: 5: Anger
Length: 2000 words
Genre: AU, drama, reflective, post-series, sadness.
Rating: pg-15 (language, adult concepts)
Summary: A lot can happen in four years...
A/N: This is the alternative POV chapter to wrldpossibility’s Seven. Thanks to co-writers, linzi20 and wrldpossibility, and to lauratnz for the beautiful banner ( Read more... )

post series, pg-15, sara, ofc, sadness, rosie_spleen, angst, michael, language, wrldpossibility, seven, omc

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sk56 July 9 2009, 03:42:55 UTC
I'm thoroughly enjoying watching the plot spool out, but just wanted to say how much I liked this

placing his hand on his forehead to prevent him from crashing his pin-cushioned skull into the wall.

Yikes!

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rosie_spleen July 9 2009, 07:46:57 UTC
Yes. Poor guy, that head must have been hurting like crazy, because it even hurt my eyes to watch him in brain pain - with all the white flashes of light coinciding with his headaches.

Hence, a pin cushion.

Glad you're enjoying the plot spooling, and thanks for your kind words : D

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jaded_chord July 9 2009, 21:31:10 UTC
I thought this chapter in particular seemed to highlight the fact that Michael is stuck in his roughest prison yet - emotionally, physically, mentally, if that makes sense. Poor guy is reaching the end of his rope. :(

Fantastic chapter as always.

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rosie_spleen July 10 2009, 04:24:12 UTC
Hey there, and thanks. Glad the chapter was okay. I agree with you about this being Michael's roughest prison yet, because he CAN just walk out the doors here, but he's trapped by the offering of his own deal. *hugs him*

Poor Michael : (

It's really awful to put him through all this ; )

Thanks for reading.

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melanyebaggins July 9 2009, 23:22:07 UTC
Wow. I love the way you explained how he got involved with this...project. And his anger is dead-on with how I imagined it. Poor Michael! I eagerly await more :D

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rosie_spleen July 10 2009, 04:25:32 UTC
Poor Mike. Glad you liked the backstory, m'dear, we held it off until anger to show this emotion in a range of ways. Originally, he didn't plan on the sickness taking up the first year, so that throws a spanner in his plan

: (

Happy weekend, and thanks!

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