Comments | prison_breakfic: Seven (5/7)

wrldpossibility in prison_breakfic

Seven (5/7)

Jul 05, 2009 18:50

Title: Seven
Author: wrldpossibility
Characters: Sara Tancredi (primarily), Michael Jr., Lincoln Burrows, mention of Michael Scofield, ensemble
Chapter: 5/7, Anger
Word Count: 2000
Rating: PG-13
Warning: The usual...I'm going to stop warning you all, I think. ;)
Spoilers: For the series.
Summary: A lot can happen in four years...
Author's Note: ( Read more... )

wrldpossibility, seven

Comments 4

bijoux83 July 8 2009, 08:37:26 UTC

Hoo, boy. I think you've probably reached the climax with this chapter. Sara's anger seems almost all consuming. I kind of hate Michael at this instances for what Junior's experience of having a father has been reduced to. Yet I hate the idea of someone doing this just to annoy Sara even more. I really think that with this you've managed to capture the show at its best - being between a rock and a hard place.

I can't wait for the last two chapters. Then I can go read rosie_spleen's companion piece. I just can't make myself do it simultaneously because I actually don't want to know if it's Michael before I know the outcome.

wrldpossibility July 8 2009, 13:46:40 UTC

Oh, that's a really interesting way to read it! That's cool.

And I agree...this show was always so much about a rock and a hard place. Thanks for commenting!

jaded_chord July 9 2009, 23:15:39 UTC

Hah, I could totally picture Kellerman in that first scene, with that smirk of his.

You can really feel Sara's frustration in this chapter, and I particularly loved the exchange she had with Lincoln regarding her haircut.

Awesome chapter as always, looking forward to the next!

wrldpossibility July 10 2009, 03:55:38 UTC

Thank you so much!