Seven (3/7)

Jun 23, 2009 10:04

Title: Seven
Author: wrldpossibility
Characters: Sara Tancredi (primarily), Michael Jr., Lincoln Burrows, mention of Michael Scofield, ensemble
Chapter: 3/7, Bargaining
Word Count: 1760
Rating: R for one profanity
Warning: *checks* Yep, still sad.
Spoilers: For the series.
Summary: A lot can happen in four years...
Author's Note: One line ( Read more... )

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melanyebaggins June 23 2009, 18:00:39 UTC
*deep shuddering sigh* Ohh, that last scene was so beautiful. And I love how perfectly natural it feels for Sara to have that inner bargaining with herself. I felt so bad for her when she had to deny being a doctor too, that must have really hurt o.O

*waits impatiently for more*

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wrldpossibility June 23 2009, 20:18:15 UTC
Yes, I imagine it would too. Poor Sara! Thank you for reading!

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accrues June 23 2009, 23:48:36 UTC
Gorgeous. I'm terrible at substantial reviews, so I'll just say that I absolutely loved it :)

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wrldpossibility June 24 2009, 02:50:45 UTC
This review is plenty substantial! Thank you!!

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jaded_chord June 26 2009, 23:13:21 UTC
Gorgeous, gorgeous chapter as always. I wish I could pick a favourite line or scene, but I loved every bit.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

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wrldpossibility June 28 2009, 03:04:19 UTC
Thank you so much for reading!

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bijoux83 June 30 2009, 06:56:43 UTC
Breathtaking last paragraph. I love that you have Alex be the one who set everything in motion. The bear hug Sara shared with Sucre in the finale was a beauty but what really got to me was the more held back one with Alex because there is SO much there.

The paranoia she feels is very tangible and understandable. I'm looking forward to seeing how you handle her change throughout the years because she seemed so peaceful in that time jump.

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wrldpossibility June 30 2009, 14:39:13 UTC
Thank you so much. I was really moved by Alex's presence at the grave site as well. It took so much for him to be there, and so much for Sara to forgive him for his role in everything, I imagine.

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