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Seven 2/7: Denial

Jun 18, 2009 21:41

Prison Break Fiction

Characters: Michael, mentions of Sara.
Chapter: 2: Denial
Length: 1800 words
Genre: AU, drama, reflective, post-series, sadness.
Rating: pg.
Summary: A lot can happen in four years...
A/N: This is the alternative POV chapter to wrldpossibility’s Seven. Thanks to linzi20 and wrldpossibility for the plotting guidance and beta skills, and to lauratnz for the beautiful ( Read more... )

post series, pg-15, sara, sadness, rosie_spleen, angst, michael, wrldpossibility, seven, wip, drama

Comments 8

melanyebaggins June 18 2009, 13:27:13 UTC

Ohhhh you've got me all curious now about who that guy is :D I have theories though ^_^

And I LOVE your use of colors here...it reminds me of a book I read years ago about synesthesia, seeing sounds. You two have me hooked on this story now :D *claps*

rosie_spleen June 19 2009, 01:41:54 UTC

Hey there! Oh, you read a book about synesthesia? I am really interested in aura conceptualization - not around people so much (as in alternative aura reading) but more within the visual sphere. It's interesting, innit? Glad you liked the colour ref.

And also, thanks for the clap (whoops, that came out wrong!) Glad we have you hooked, and although it's pretty gloomy, I hope it's worth the ride.

Oh, and you know who that guy is, right? Nika after a sex change, maybe? Avocado? Hmmm

*g*

melanyebaggins June 19 2009, 13:59:01 UTC

ewwwwwwww! Traumatise poor Michael, why don't ya? Mwahahaha it's WESTMORELAND back from the dead ^_^ or or or...Michael's TWIN BROTHER *dun dun dunnnnn*

Seriously, I can't wait for more :D

rosie_spleen June 20 2009, 01:30:50 UTC

Michael doesn't have a twin brother, lady. HECK, he doesn't even have a brother according to our esteemed writers, *g*

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jaded_chord June 20 2009, 17:25:21 UTC

Oh man, poor Michael. That last line just killed me.

I really love the details describing how Michael's dreaming of Sara and the use of colours.

Oh, and I'm definitely intrigued as to who the watcher is now. Great chapter, I'm looking forward to the next!

rosie_spleen June 21 2009, 02:37:05 UTC

Thanks a lot for the lovely words. Because there is so little colour in his life - and his vision is impaired - I wanted to use the colour to help lift the mood a bit.

Thanks again. Hope your weekend is a good one.