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Here With Me

Sep 11, 2008 22:45

Title: Here With Me
Author: Melanye Baggins
Characters: Sara, Michael, Gretchen
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Torture (not explicit, but enough to need a warning)
Spoilers: Season 4 (missing scene fic)
Prompt:

‘You’ve heard of Post Traumatic Stress Disorder, right? I’m gonna call you a prime candidate, I don’t think a lot of people have been ( Read more... )

sara, michael, gretchen, spoilers, melanyebaggins, season 4

Comments 2

luv_faith_dream September 12 2008, 05:57:56 UTC

Wow, that was so strong! I've to take some deep breaths to get back into reality.lol. I loved it!!! Beautifully written, so emotional and moving! I like how she needs Michael to have the strengths to go through this. And the way you wrote it, it seems like he's really there in the room which makes it much easier to feel the way Sara does, since for her it's real.(Does that make sense? Sorry I cant explain it better;)) The last sentence killed me... So heartbreaking, but great work!

melanyebaggins September 12 2008, 12:00:45 UTC

aww, thank you! I was pretty nervous about it actually since it's been quite a while since I've written anything like this. Your comment made me smile a lot! That was exactly what I was going for...he was a hallucination, but to her he was really there in the room with her. Fine line, and all that ^_^