yep I like the sound of this. Sequel definitely required! Wheeler is intriguing and I like the idea of him 'finding the mentor and friend he never realized he had until it was too late'.
yep I like the sound of this. Sequel definitely required!
Thanks :) Since Pam realisticlly can not go looking for Alex when she has a lil boy recovering from a broken leg I would not surprised at all to see the writers toy with this Wheeler looking for Mahone scenario.
Everything in a script that close to the end of the season has to have meaning -- there is no space to waste -- so that exchange in the parking garage, especially don't let them scare you part, likely was setting up something.
Sequel definitely required! I've heard through the fic grapeline someone else is going to take a swing at a follow up very soon.
Wheeler is intriguing and I like the idea of him 'finding the mentor and friend he never realized he had until it was too late'.
They make a nice image of the, older/jaded and younger/clueless, same man.
I've heard through the fic grapeline someone else is going to take a swing at a follow up very soon. We have a fic grapeline? Besides, you shouldn't put pressure on me like that >.< hehe, we'll see what I can do.
I love this fic, for selfish reasons that I *wanted* it and therefore gave you the prompt to do it... also because your imagination beats mine tenfold.
Slowing only a moment before turning the corner, the smile on his face easing my mind only the tiniest bit, he becomes the image of the man he now hunts with one last all too familiar request.
"Oh and Lang... since I have no idea when I'll get back... I'll need you to cover for me." Oh yes, very Alex. That's my boy!
I love the rewording you did in some of this, it makes it a little more fluid and very pretty. I love Wheeler, always have, and the fact that he gets his very own fic and very own pairing just about, makes me happy :)
So commendations, and you just *know* that I have to recc this, right?
I love this fic, for selfish reasons that I *wanted* it and therefore gave you the prompt to do it
It was a great prompt so thank you!!
also because your imagination beats mine tenfold. Awwwwww you are too kind!! Of course it really is the staff writers not me or my imagination. They set up all kinds of things, that exchange in the parking garage was a huge open door connecting the two characters in a whole new way, that I only, after picking up on and pondering then, flesh out!
They are the Gods of plot bunnies!!
"Oh and Lang... since I have no idea when I'll get back... I'll need you to cover for me." Oh yes, very Alex. That's my boy!
I love that part because I can see her -- * OMG, seriously... not another Mahone! * -- face clear as day in my head.
Poor LANG!!
I love the rewording you did in some of this, it makes it a little more fluid and very pretty.Glad it worked okay. I do that to myself all the time, just one of my many quirks, so its not the beta at all. If you want a laugh.. when you happen to see me post a
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Thanks!! I liked the idea because slipping behind that desk... rummaging through it was a nice fitting metaphor of Wheeler stepping into Mahones shoes.
Someone has to wonder what happened to Alex and if the writers are paying close attention to what they've set up that person is more likely to be Wheeler than anyone else :o)
OMG please, write the sequel! I think I'm going to stop being so pissed off and Wheeler and even try to get him. You did a really stunning job with writing this fic, it's so canon! And Lang! How much I love her, she's wonderful! And Wheeler's being the right guy, who only wants justice, who wants to find Mahone, because now he's sure that there's something more in it... And I've almost finished my part of our fic - my English-studying friend is pre-checking it for me and you know what? It's got Wheeler, too!;P It should be ready after my long weekend journey and getting my comp back from the service again.
"He was angry... angry as hell! So pissed off at me I figured you'd be more likely to find me lying dead next my car the next morning before running across me in here tonight. He was angry but there was more... he was desperate... cornered by something that had nothing to do with any internal investigation... almost scared." I'd loved it! And the text about the fact that he started to act like Mahone... So easy to imagine it!:)
While I'm not writing it myself, I'm very into teamwork ya know, but a sequel is in the works! YAY!!
And Lang! How much I love her, she's wonderful! Can you imagine... one Alex disappears and another just like him turns up behind his desk. POOR LANG!
And Wheeler's being the right guy, who only wants justice, who wants to find Mahone, because now he's sure that there's something more in it...
I think he got a glimpse of how bad things were in that parking garage so a threat to let it go or else would be enough for him to need to know -- just like Mahone -- what is really going on.
I've almost finished my part of our fic - my English-studying friend is pre-checking it for me and you know what? It's got Wheeler, too!;P It should be ready after my long weekend journey and getting my comp back from the service again.
YAY!! I'm very excited for this :o)the fact that he started to act like Mahone... So easy to imagine it!:)I saw it... think we may have been supposed to see it
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yep I like the sound of this. Sequel definitely required! Wheeler is intriguing and I like the idea of him 'finding the mentor and friend he never realized he had until it was too late'.
Thanks for writing.
Louise
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Thanks :) Since Pam realisticlly can not go looking for Alex when she has a lil boy recovering from a broken leg I would not surprised at all to see the writers toy with this Wheeler looking for Mahone scenario.
Everything in a script that close to the end of the season has to have meaning -- there is no space to waste -- so that exchange in the parking garage, especially don't let them scare you part, likely was setting up something.
Sequel definitely required!
I've heard through the fic grapeline someone else is going to take a swing at a follow up very soon.
Wheeler is intriguing and I like the idea of him 'finding the mentor and friend he never realized he had until it was too late'.
They make a nice image of the, older/jaded and younger/clueless, same man.
Thanks for the great feeback, Louise ;o)
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We have a fic grapeline? Besides, you shouldn't put pressure on me like that >.< hehe, we'll see what I can do.
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Okay... maybe I made it up... then again perhaps I didn't ;o)
you shouldn't put pressure on me like that >.< hehe, we'll see what I can do.
Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!! No names here so we don't want to pressure on the kind soul * wink wink * who MAY BE working on sequel :oP~~
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Slowing only a moment before turning the corner, the smile on his face easing my mind only the tiniest bit, he becomes the image of the man he now hunts with one last all too familiar request.
"Oh and Lang... since I have no idea when I'll get back... I'll need you to cover for me."
Oh yes, very Alex. That's my boy!
I love the rewording you did in some of this, it makes it a little more fluid and very pretty. I love Wheeler, always have, and the fact that he gets his very own fic and very own pairing just about, makes me happy :)
So commendations, and you just *know* that I have to recc this, right?
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It was a great prompt so thank you!!
also because your imagination beats mine tenfold.
Awwwwww you are too kind!! Of course it really is the staff writers not me or my imagination. They set up all kinds of things, that exchange in the parking garage was a huge open door connecting the two characters in a whole new way, that I only, after picking up on and pondering then, flesh out!
They are the Gods of plot bunnies!!
"Oh and Lang... since I have no idea when I'll get back... I'll need you to cover for me."
Oh yes, very Alex. That's my boy!
I love that part because I can see her -- * OMG, seriously... not another Mahone! * -- face clear as day in my head.
Poor LANG!!
I love the rewording you did in some of this, it makes it a little more fluid and very pretty.Glad it worked okay. I do that to myself all the time, just one of my many quirks, so its not the beta at all. If you want a laugh.. when you happen to see me post a ( ... )
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Oh dont say *that* ;)
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So true, you can have so much bumpf on your desk - but does any of it, or should any of it ;) give away who you are?
Thanks.
Issy
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Someone has to wonder what happened to Alex and if the writers are paying close attention to what they've set up that person is more likely to be Wheeler than anyone else :o)
Thanks again
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I think I'm going to stop being so pissed off and Wheeler and even try to get him. You did a really stunning job with writing this fic, it's so canon! And Lang! How much I love her, she's wonderful! And Wheeler's being the right guy, who only wants justice, who wants to find Mahone, because now he's sure that there's something more in it...
And I've almost finished my part of our fic - my English-studying friend is pre-checking it for me and you know what? It's got Wheeler, too!;P It should be ready after my long weekend journey and getting my comp back from the service again.
"He was angry... angry as hell! So pissed off at me I figured you'd be more likely to find me lying dead next my car the next morning before running across me in here tonight. He was angry but there was more... he was desperate... cornered by something that had nothing to do with any internal investigation... almost scared."
I'd loved it! And the text about the fact that he started to act like Mahone... So easy to imagine it!:)
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While I'm not writing it myself, I'm very into teamwork ya know, but a sequel is in the works! YAY!!
And Lang! How much I love her, she's wonderful!
Can you imagine... one Alex disappears and another just like him turns up behind his desk. POOR LANG!
And Wheeler's being the right guy, who only wants justice, who wants to find Mahone, because now he's sure that there's something more in it...
I think he got a glimpse of how bad things were in that parking garage so a threat to let it go or else would be enough for him to need to know -- just like Mahone -- what is really going on.
I've almost finished my part of our fic - my English-studying friend is pre-checking it for me and you know what? It's got Wheeler, too!;P It should be ready after my long weekend journey and getting my comp back from the service again.
YAY!! I'm very excited for this :o)the fact that he started to act like Mahone... So easy to imagine it!:)I saw it... think we may have been supposed to see it ( ... )
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