Shadows (part 1/?)

[angelicus]

Title: Shadows
Author: angel_1013
Rating: R for language & violence
Characters: Michael POV with others thrown in for flavor.
Summary: This is the third and last installment of my Regret/Pieces series. You should probably read Regret and Pieces first as this won’t make much sense otherwise. Shadows takes us back to Michael’s POV and runs parallel time-wise

Comments

[wentworth801]

I noticed that she didn’t have any shoes, jewelry or accessories on and I laughed to myself. Did they think I would break out with a belt?

I guess they’re afraid I’ll magically break out of this new fortress with a #2 pencil.

I love the humor you instilled in Michael. Nice to see his POV! Keep up the great work!!!

[angelicus]

Thanks! I guess in my head, Michael has an inner sarcastic voice. Especially since we see so little of his personality on the show. To me, when I'm watching, I'm thinking of what he might be thinking as he Blue Steels across the yard. And it's usually something amusing.

[mrs_boyscout]

“You’ll probably have to be more specific. It’s been a busy week for me,”

Teeehee... Loved this line and the little bits of humor that you were able to infuse in an otherwise very bleak chapter. Bellick is such a jealous asshat.

[angelicus]

Thanks! Michael's funny as shit in my head. *lol* I hope it translates as semi believable.

[tigerlily0]

Yay! You've started the Michael POV story.

I like your Michael. He's not that funny on the show, but I can see how he could be. You need humor to make it through the tough times, right? I like the little details like the fact that he studied every square inch of his cell, and admired the handiwork. I also like the #2 pencil crack.

I like your portrayal of Veronica, too.

[angelicus]

Thanks! I'm glad you're liking it so far. Sarcastic Michael speaks to me. *lol*

[accrues]

Most men would probably take that as a big hint that things were over.

I’m not most men.
Absolutely! Just love it.. so true.

The humour is very amusing.. I know what you mean about Sarcastic Michael, I always say outloud what he's saying... bit like the screencap recaps, but funnier ;) well.. to me, anyway.

Glad you've started this! Cant wait to see more!!

[angelicus]

*snerk* Your icon will always remind me of the Screencap Recap I did of that scene. I'm sick, I know.

I'm glad you're liking it! I debated about waiting until I was finished writing it to start posting so I could do a part a day like Pieces, but in the end I caved. I hope everyone can be patient in between updates. *bats eyes*

[accrues]

I hope everyone can be patient in between updates. *bats eyes*
*is no where near patient*

YOU JUST RUINED MY ICON. I Luff this icon! *slaps* grrrrrr.

*mutters*

[angelicus]

Awww...I'm sorry. Just forget that he's tooting and go with your emo interpretation. *lol*

But you know he's SO totally tooting. *cackles evilly*

[dirtandweeds]

I guess they’re afraid I’ll magically break out of this new fortress with a #2 pencil. == That, and also he might try to use it as a weapon against an officer, or himself. God knows I’d stab myself in the neck with it if I were in his place.

Although, someone lost a hand. But I didn’t have anything to do with that. Well, I did, but not really. I didn’t actually chop… == *lol* I really like the way you inserted a sort of light humour into Michael since he got recaptured. There’s something peaceful about knowing his part has been played, and there’s no more plans left on his mind.

Well, I guess we’ll have plenty of time to figure it out since all your friends have been recaptured. == Well that’s a depressing thought... but the idea of Veronica on a speeding skateboard makes it all better!

[angelicus]

There’s something peaceful about knowing his part has been played, and there’s no more plans left on his mind.

Exactly! I imagine him knowing he has no control over anything at this point. His part is done, so now he's got to come to terms that he's just stuck there for a while.