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Pieces (part 4/?)

Jun 28, 2006 16:12

Title: Pieces (part 4)
Author: angel_1013
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Sara POV, Michael & others
Disclaimer: Many other people own Prison Break and its characters. I just borrow them.
Spoilers: End of season 1
Summary: Sequel to Regret from Sara’s POV. I highly suggest reading it first. It’s only 2 parts; you can do it.

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3

( Employees of a prison aren’t the only ones who gossip... )

sara, michael, angel_1013, pg13

Comments 20

wentworth801 June 28 2006, 23:19:04 UTC

No!!!! Don't do this!!!!!!!!!!!!!

angelicus June 29 2006, 14:41:29 UTC

*lol* I'm sorry. =( But I have to. You can suffer through it for just a little bit longer, right? *hopes*

wentworth801 June 29 2006, 15:36:13 UTC

Post! post! I need another one!!

snowwhite22 June 28 2006, 23:55:18 UTC

Oh man. You're killing me. Just killing me.

What has Michael been through in TWO YEARS?? Damn. Talk about a tortured soul. Just absolutely brutal to think about it.

I do love that you've had Sara move on with her life. She wouldn't be stagnant. She'd rebuild and move on because she's a fighter. I like that you've not only recognized it in her, but that you are letting her fall in love. Nice job.

Still, you're killing me. I'm dying to know what has happened to Michael's state of mind.

angelicus June 29 2006, 14:47:11 UTC

*twirls you* Thank you! I find it impossible to write wimpy, pining women. *lol* I just saw it as more realistic that she HAD moved on. It doesn't mean she's forgotten about him. And sadly, we won't find out what's going on in Michael's head since this is in Sara's POV. Muahahaha...

You'll find out a little bit more of what he's thinking in a few short parts, though. *grins*

sierra_foxx June 29 2006, 00:08:17 UTC

Oh my god....you really know how to ratchet up the angst! Michael...you have to let us know what's going on in his mind! TWO YEARS! Oh, I can't bear to think about it...but I will! Great job, Angel - more please!!

angelicus June 29 2006, 14:49:48 UTC

I wish I could! But alas, this is Sara's POV so we're stuck with how she sees Michael. Maybe when I finish this I'll write a companion piece to this with Michael's POV. Hmmm...this whole thing could end up being a series of different POVs if I don't watch out. *lol*

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angelicus June 29 2006, 14:52:50 UTC

Superman! He rocks my socks off! So you liked it, I take it? *lol* We totally need to have a breakdown of our thoughts on this piece of cinematic mastery. *snort*

I'm pretty far ahead on writing this, so for now I'll post a new part every day. Maybe I can make this 70 parts! Heh. Er...no.

dirtandweeds June 29 2006, 05:29:42 UTC

Wow... two years is a hell of a long time to be in solitary. Let's just hope Michael still has all his body parts. Dying to know what happens next... and hopefully it will include Evan falling down a well!

angelicus June 29 2006, 14:53:44 UTC

As far as I know he still has all his parts. Well, minus 2 toes of course. *lol*

Unfortunately, there are no wells around, but I'll see what I can do.