Fic: Blindsided

[prismdropz]

Title: Blindsided (also posted in bleach_yaoi & ura_ichi )
Author: Hiruma Musouka
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,028
Pairing: Urahara Kisuke / Kurosaki Ichigo
Warnings: it's shonen-ai - you've been warned, so don't bitch at me later
Summary: Because even geniuses can miss the blatantly obvious

Comments

[cutsycat]

That's great. I loved it. Keep up the good work.

[prismdropz]

Thanks, I'll try!

[freyalilith]

*giggles* THAT was so cool. It really did sound like -happy- Urahara (I'm sure he has a serious side in him, even though we tend to ignore it). You did him so well! *still giggling* Thanks for the awsome fic!!!!!!

[prismdropz]

Aw I'm blushing! I'm so glad you liked it. This is the first time I've ever written with Urahara. I'm ecstatic he turned out so well!

[eunheemarks]

wow! loved it! More like this please....with puppy eyes.

[prismdropz]

I'll certainly try to write more, but the initial inspiration came out of nowhere so I'm not sure how long it will be before I write an Ura/Ichi again. Maybe after I read a good Bleach fic to get me thinking...

[madrona_8]

That was terrific. I like how you turned the tables. It's usually Ichigo who's Mr. Clueless.

[prismdropz]

Yeah, I thought it was nice to have Kisuke caught off guard for once! And Ichigo would definately have the gumption to steal a kiss once he came to grips with his feelings. (Nice icon by the way! ^.^)

[horusguard76]

That's a good story with a very good characterization of Kisuke. (poor oblivious guy!) Him not noticing the obvious is soooo like him. ;) Hope to read more by you.

[prismdropz]

I'm so happy Kisuke turned out so well! Characterization is one of the most important aspects of writing in my perspective.

(grin) Kisuke's problem is something we've all experienced, I'm sure. You spend so much time concerned about the little things and something obvious smacks you in the face!

I'm not sure when I'll have more Ura/Ichi but I've already written a 20 facts Bleach fic featuring the Zanpakuto if you want to read it. I think the 20_souls community's manager has abandoned it so I haven't posted my fic anywhere but this journal yet.

[horusguard76]

Amen to that statement. Sadly there are so many stories out there with funny or great plots but the characters come across as horribly OCC. Thus your story is a true gem out there! :)

hehe, indeed. I myself can be quite klutz sometimes.

Ohhhh, more reading material during Christmas! YAY! I will so check it out. Thank you.

[prismdropz]

I forgot! Here's the address to my fic - http://prismdropz.livejournal.com/10175.html. I've finally managed to get it edited right (the links kept screwing up on me).