Merlin Fic - Struggles for Destiny

Nov 16, 2008 15:00


Title: Struggles for Destiny
Summary: “It’s ok” muttered Arthur, as much to himself as to Merlin, “I’m here, it’s ok, nothing’s going to get you, don’t worry, you’re safe, I’m here.”
Characters/ Pairings : Merthur
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst
Words: 200
A/N Beta'd by the ever wonderful Alichay

Arthur held Merlin on his bed as the smell of burning flesh and ( Read more... )

merthur, angst, fanfic, merlin

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Comments 18

marn_barn November 16 2008, 19:09:38 UTC
This is heartbreaking, but so adorable. I can almost see how hurt they both are and how they're comforting each other.

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princessezzy November 16 2008, 19:41:05 UTC
Thankyou! i'm glad it came across well XD

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princessezzy November 16 2008, 19:42:48 UTC
Thankyou! glad it made you happy XD

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nyx_nox November 16 2008, 19:28:12 UTC
*sighs* This is gorgeous, I love it. The hurt and pain but the comfort and oh it's lovely *sighs again* I'm barely coherent with the angstyness!
the smaller boy huddled closer and tried to muffle his choked sobs in Arthur’s tunic. That image just gets to me entirely, it's so sweet.
Also typo in the first line, should be dying :)

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princessezzy November 16 2008, 19:44:34 UTC
Thanyou! glad you liked it, though i hope it isn't too angst! oh dear, thanks, i'll correct that XD

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nyx_nox November 16 2008, 19:49:23 UTC
No I think it's just the right balance :D

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counselor69 November 16 2008, 19:41:56 UTC
*angst* I can feel it. Well written, very intense.

Thanks for sharing!

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princessezzy November 16 2008, 19:45:27 UTC
Thankyou! i'm glad you think so! thankYOU for reviewing so nicely XD

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lupus_malus November 16 2008, 22:26:53 UTC
Short and bitter-sweet. Nice.

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princessezzy November 16 2008, 22:35:48 UTC
Thankyou! i'm glad you approved XD

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