help please?

[princess_borgz]

So... I've started writing a JAM fic (that's Jonne/Bam) and I want it to be smutty, but there's a problem. I'm really bad at writing smut! I never know which words to use that will fit the story and in the end I usually just give up. If anybody can give me any smutty pointers I would be eternally grateful!!!

Comments

[mildly_neurotic]

I usually try and picture the scene in my head (yea I know I'm a pervert, that's the point of smut yes?) then describe it.

The hardest part in writing smut in my opinion is avoiding excessive word repetion. That can be an issue anytime some one is writing but is really true writing sex as its a repetitive act in and of itself.

Especially with a same sex encounter where the pronouns are all the same and you either have to over use their names, or risk confusion of who is doing what to who. I try and keep each characters actions in seperate paragraphs to try and keep it clearer. You are going to get crazy tired of the cocks kiss, suck, throb, thrust, and especially cock! *grin*

Good luck!

[princess_borgz]

thanks for the reply!

I have a feeling your pointers are going to come in very handy. Cock... *drools*... you were saying? Oh yeah, will very likely be sick of all those words by the end!! Anyways, I will probably leave this one for a little bit, til I've finished my VAM story, but thankyou so much for you help!!