Hidden And Found

[aki_kaede]

Title: Hidden And Found
Pairing: Rey Za Burrel/Cagalli Yula Attha
Rating: K+
Disclaimer: I do not own Gundam Seed Destiny or any of its characters

My first ReyCaga! Hope you enjoy this. This is also posted in 10_passions.

Comments

[whitelilies22]

NIce work here :) Just a few things:

... with his striking, topaz eyes

I believe topaz is a yellow colour. 'Tis my birthstone afterall ^^
'Blue Topaz' is (obviously) blue. I don't know if that matters or not but yeah... and

...he never allowed anybody to go into his room

try changing the 'anybody' to 'anyone', it would probably flow better.

[aki_kaede]

Oh so you were born in November? I comtemplated using my birthstone as his eye colour but thought it was too dark.

I think it should be blue topaz. When I went to Thailand, the people at the jewellery shop were trying to promote a blue gem lighter than sapphire. They said it was topaz. So that is where my misconception came from?

And I guess you know the month which I am born in now! :)

[whitelilies22]

Really eh? 'Tis news to me and I've thought that topaz was always a yellow color, that's all. You hit the bulleye ^^

I have a good guess now ^^