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Sydney Changes Things Prologue/?

Jan 28, 2012 00:20

Title: Sydney Changes Things
Author: princess2000204
Warning: Adult Content, Kid!fic,
Rating: PG-13
Summary: What are you suppose to do when your girlfriend gets pregnant and then goes hysterical about it, not to mention no one is happy about it.......Just move on and do what you can to survive, it's not the child's fault.......

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bill/tom, th, writing, sydney, fanfic

Comments 2

kseenaa January 28 2012, 14:00:36 UTC

After having read your previous story, from a first person point of view, I got used to it. And you have to same flow here. I like that it is Bill with a girlfriend (probably pregnant) and not Tom. That would have been to cliché in my world. Bill IS a guy after all, something a lot of fans have a tendency to forget. Anyway, I ramble. I love how you describe Kamalas and Bills relationship. It really DOES sound like they are a good match. :-) You set up a very interesting start. Yes, on the surface it feels like your run of the mill highschool fic, but something is moving under the surface to... (And I am not talking about the pregnancy...) It is going to be very interesting to see what you'll do with this. :-)

princess2000204 January 28 2012, 22:25:06 UTC

Thank you for reading this.

This story is completely different from what I generally write but I can honestly say I doubt I'll ever write an MPREG fic so you can be safe in knowing I generally tend to live in reality.

Next chapter, which I'm hoping will be posted within the day or next, will show you what I mean by not a stereotypical High school fic.