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Nov 05, 2006 02:49

Ode to the lass gentle and fair

She stole my heart in the warm summer's air

Her eyes are the stars like a goddess divine

What luck has blessed me to have her be mine

My love, my life, my desert rose.And that is the first verse of the new ode I'm writing. I still seem to be stuck on one particular line...but hopefully I'll have the song finished ( Read more... )

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ambitiousblond November 7 2006, 07:31:05 UTC
Quite lovely, that. I'm sure she will be pleased to hear such words said about her.

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princeofdamcyan November 7 2006, 20:45:46 UTC
Oh, well thank you Sir Raphael! Perhaps your'd like to look over the finished lyrics for me to make sure it isn't terrible. I really want it to be perfect for her.

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