"the magician" : part ten of ten

Sep 14, 2008 14:38

Notes:

Well, this is it, the last part! There is just something I wanted to clear up, before I conclude the fic. There are some unexplained or badly explained points in the fic, that just never ended up being addressed properly because of timing, or flow, or if it wasn't available knowledge to Ohno (because it's in his POV). So I will answer them ( Read more... )

the magician, arashi, fic, chaptered

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still_ciircee September 14 2008, 19:23:21 UTC
I am. Such a dork. I cried at the end. I really did. I got a little watery when Ohno hugged Nino and then again when they all agreed to go but that ending? That was perfect. And the line 'we could do anything' is so perfectly them--both this Arashi and the real Arashi.

I love this story. It's funny, it's dramatic, it's moving, it's a mystery, and it's an adventure. I am so very glad that I found it.

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primroseshows September 14 2008, 19:39:33 UTC
Well, I tried to do it with your last comment, but I really don't know how to thank you properly for all the reviews and time you've spent on this fic. The first time you commented I was so thrilled because really, I love your writing (I remember gorging myself on all your xxxholic stories, before I even had an lj account, and then when you started writing Arashi...) so it felt like a celebrity was here or something? Man I hope that didn't sound stalker-ish.

Thank you again. This fic has consumed my soul for the better part of two months, so to have such positive feedback, it means a lot. Anyway I'm getting super disgustingly mushy now, so that's my cue to stop.

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yukikazie September 14 2008, 20:28:50 UTC
T_T

That. as;doifjsdf.
That was the most beautiful ending I've ever read.
I am completely, utterly, at a loss of words.

It was perfect.

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primroseshows September 14 2008, 20:53:43 UTC
T_______________T

Thank you. I'm so happy you liked it.

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primroseshows September 14 2008, 21:00:31 UTC
Your timing is really amazing! I JUST left a comment on a wallpaper post of yours!

YES! You caught the hidden meaning in that line, perfect! I'm glad the ending was satisfactory. :)
I-if you want to fanart, PLEASE REALIZE THAT I WOULD BE THE LAST PERSON TO STOP YOU.

And thank you so much for reading.

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primroseshows September 15 2008, 21:32:48 UTC
OMG *CLICK*

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yay_box September 14 2008, 22:01:01 UTC
This is so... so beautiful, touching, moving. Perfect.
I really suck at commenting fics because I never know what to say but... I REALLY love this one. Well written, wonderful characters, an actual PLOT!, beautiful relationships. There's also something special about your fic, I don't know how to explain, something tangible, like it has its own atmosphere (i don't know if that makes any sense but i can't find a better word)
Thank you so much for writing it and sharing it with us, this goes straight to my memories.

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primroseshows September 14 2008, 22:21:11 UTC
Your comment was wonderful, I don't know what you mean about not knowing what to say. Thanks for all your kind words. To hear that the atmosphere was so noticeable is really great, I'm glad.

Thank you for reading! <3

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bclar September 14 2008, 23:45:21 UTC
Oh, that. That. That was so awesome. Stories like these I devoured five to ten years ago. Reading this reminds me why.

The story's nice, and well-written, and has just the right amount Ohmiya. I think it's good you didn't write it more explicit. Gives them some space to develop.

And I love evil!Johnny fics.

<3

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primroseshows September 15 2008, 21:15:51 UTC
Thank you so much. I really appreciate it. I'm glad there wasn't too much or too little Ohmiya, most fics has the primary focus on only their relationship, but the plot here involving Nino's family was really important so I tried to make a good balance.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

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