"the magician" : part nine of ten

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Notes: mmmm, climax.

part nine

FORTY

Sho's at the window first, but he refrains from breaking the glass. Something inside has caught his attention. Ohno dashes up beside him to look.

Johnny's drenched with sweat and panting, but he's still standing. Nino is on the opposite side of the room, top hat in one hand and the other clutching

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[still_ciircee]

I don't know that I can mash at my keyboard effectively enough to convey my love. I really...I just...:LSJDFl;sFDZOMG. Ninooooo! Poor Ohno feeling so hurt and he lashed out in just the best way to hurt Nino, too. And of course Nino dropped the bag on purpose. Of course he switched the money to the hat. And poor Ohno knowing just what that photo meant to Nino and believing that he (and Arashi) might lose to that. I just want to hug them all.

Another thing I love--aside from the pacing and flow and tension--is how even when things are sad and the characters feel awful it is not a wallowing self-pity sort of awful. They get over it, they pick up, they keep going and that--that--is Arashi.

[primroseshows]

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Thank you thank you thank you for all of your comments. I really, really, really appreciated each and every one of them. They really encouraged me to post the fic as quickly as I did (which is really fast for me). Thank you.

[leenoux]

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That's sooo sad! NOooo~!! Nino!!

Hehe okay.. *run immediately to the next chapter* xD

[primroseshows]

Ha ha, great reaction!! Aren't you glad I put up all the chapters together? ;)

[maiaide]

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Oh-chan! I want to cry for you!