gangsta blues

[primroseshows]

Title: This Might Have Been Easier Without the Death Ray (4/7, 5/7)
Rating: PG-13
Notes: whoooo new chapter whoooooo please ignore the fact that it's a day late whoooooo

Comments

[aatash]

On one hand, I don't want it to end; on the other... Nuuuu Satoshi mamaaaa ;o;

ps: I don't know if that was your intention, but I laughed when I saw the Thursday chapter. ♥

[primroseshows]

Yes! I was going for a laugh there, so I'm glad I got one out of you! ♥

oh man I just realized that I am pretty mean to Ohno's mom in my fics?? T___T I have no one to blame for this but myself!!

[aatash]

Genius.

I have a friend who's an aspiring writer, and she loves tormenting her main characters. A common trait of good writers? 8D

[primroseshows]

It's just that we want to torment the reader and the main character is the proxy. ;)

[kailice]

YOU ♥
You're really good at fitting a million emotions in one chapter. Thursday made me laugh and the chat conversation was hilarious (The camel thing XDDD ) but then you make Ohno Mama sick and Oh-chan cry. See that heart up there ^? It's mine, and YOU PLAY WITH IT.

It will be sad to see it end, but looking forward to the last parts!

[primroseshows]

You have to tell me if I'm ever fitting too much into one chapter, okay? Because I get really worried about the balance between length and pacing and if I ever overdo it, someone has to let me know!

Ohno's mother's condition - not supposed to be a surprised, l-lol? It was mentioned in the first chapter, that she had cancer and that she had a doctor's appointment. OTL DID I FAIL AT THIS

omg but thank you so much for your comment!! I am really really glad you're enjoying it, and I hope you like the finale too! ♥♥&hearts

[kailice]

Nope, you didn't fail, I meant it all in a good way ♥ It flows really well and never feels like you tried to cram too much in. And I did remember Ohno's mother's illness, so it wasn't surprising... but any misfortune on Ohno or Ohno mama is sad. But this is a good sad. Yay, irony!

[waxrose]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH. ♥

I love this story so fucking much. It makes me laugh and sniffle and I cannot wait to see how it all wraps up. I think I'll be sorry to see it end, though. :(

[primroseshows]

It's ending! I mean, it's ended. Oh man, I had no idea how it was going to end either -- I mean, the ending that I'd originally planned out did not end up working so I was surprising myself as I wrote /FAIL

I hope you like it! Sorry for the late reply. ♥

[nicefinalbeam]

My favorite part? When Nino proved himself to be a human being behind all that overreacting and amusing paranoia. Not pretending to cry or be upset to play on Sho's emotions.

"Sho-chan," Nino murmured. "I'm--" he sniffed, and covered his mouth.

I just loved that. He realized what he could lose. It's such an important part of everything he's going through - that he knows the consequences.

ANYWAAAAY... NINO/JUN OTP?

:D

And poor Ohno. :( Fuck cancer.

[primroseshows]

Thank you so much. I try to put a little bit of character development in there, so it's not as boring. Also with the length of the stories I write, it would be amazing if the characters didn't end up going through some ~*DRAMAZ*~

NINO/JUN OTP?

BFFS 4 LYFE

&hearts you! So sorry for the late reply!!

[nicefinalbeam]

OMG completely ignoring all that and I apologize but DID YOU WATCH THE FINAL EPISODE OF FLIGHT OF THE CONCHORDS!?

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I've missed youuuuu. ♥

[primroseshows]

I WATCHED IT OH GOD DAVE AS STATUE OF LIBERTY SO MUCH WIN OMG OMG

"I WAS A SHEPHERD" CRYING

SO BEAUTIFUL SOB

I am sad to see it end but I think it was a very good ending, and I appreciate that they didn't string it out for so long that it lost its humour. fotccc ♥

I missed you too bb!!

[blueandflawless]

STILL IN LOVE OVER HERE
FYI
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[primroseshows]

♥ GOOD TO KNOW