nevah gonna give u up

[primroseshows]

Title: This Might Have Been Easier Without the Death Ray (3/7)
Rating: PG-13, still for swearing
Notes: Sorry this is a bit late guys, I got stuck in a wormhole and had to fight my way back to present day from the Mesozoic era. Also sorry if there are any glaring errors; I made a few changes here and there but I'm not at my most alert right now, I

Comments

[slowtech]

oh man, I totally just ripped through the last two chapters and omg this one was amazing, they all are, and holy crap, I freaking love the setting you've created and your characterization is so fab (Nino and Jun's interactions are priceless) and this is MAXIMUM hilarious and well-written and just omgomg. Quickly becoming one of my favorite fics, seriously. I CAN'T GET ENOUGH. I can't wait to see where you take this. Just ASD;LFJKSLDKJFLKSDJF ~insane fangirl mode because this is kicking my ass in the best way possible~ !! ♥

[primroseshows]

YES to your entire comment, just YES YES YES. I love you for enjoying this and finding it hilarious, ha ha! Your enthusiasm brings so much joy into my heart. ♥

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I hope you will enjoy the rest of the story. :)

[slowtech]

:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Yeeeeeeeeah, I'm pretty sure I will, haha! Please keep it up, I can't wait for the next installment! ♥

[nicefinalbeam]

GOD DAMN IT WRITE A BOOK RIGHT THE FUCK NOW, OKAY?

WRITE. A. NOVEL.

SELL IT FOR MONIES.

YOU WILL NOT BE SORRY.

[primroseshows]

LMAO ILU

m-man, here I am offering my services for free and you are telling me to get money for it?? Clearly you should be my manager. ♥

[rinalin]

OMGOMGOMG!

I LOVE THIS. Like massively.

"My life is flashing before my eyes," Nino whispered to Aiba, even though Aiba was already half-asleep.

"Popsicles," Aiba murmured back.

LOL!

Poor Nino.

[primroseshows]

Nino's life is hard, trufax. lmao I'm happy you like it!! :) Thank you for commenting!

[oviparous]

i woke up in a daze and switched on my computer, and when i saw you updated i did nothing but read your fic over breakfast. (okay, something like breakfast, i woke up at 2 in the afernoon XD)

i have so much to say to you, but i need to go out now and it can't wait, so... i guess i'll be back later? :D

i love you darling. XD and i am REALLY curious here - what do you study in university?

[primroseshows]

2PM?! Noooo, not breakfast anymore. Late, late lunch. Afternoon tea.

Ha ha, are you curious about why I complain about school so much? Well, I'm mainly in psychology, but I have a few electives - so I'm taking a little more than I can handle right now, I guess? *nervous laughter* OTL But I've never taken any creative writing courses (if this is not already obvious) and I really want to.

[oviparous]

i just had a FANTASTIC afternoon tea today and it was at this place called 'an english rose cafe', and suddenly i am thinking of you. XD

ANYWAY this is so out-of-point XD

psychology... *whistles* hard stuff, eh? yes, now i can see why you complain about school so much. XD the older i get the more psych majors i know!!! is this a good sign or a bad sign? XD no, it is not obvious that you haven't taken any creative writing courses. no worries over there, baby. ha. i hope you get to though!

oh and the stuff that i wanted to say about this part. right.

i thought you were genius here:
Today's heist was nothing political; just a replenishing of their depleted grocery funds. The job was easy, thanks to two special debit cards made courtesy of Aiba’s genius: number one would go in one ATM machine, make a "transfer of funds" that hacked into their system, and halfway across the city, number two would go into its machine and extract all the cash. While this was happening, their computer bug's program would start, causing the sprinkler

[primroseshows]

I don't find my program too difficult. I mean, I do, but that's because I am shit at time management. But theoretically, it's an okay program!

lol the cafe. Cute.

I can't believe you complimented me for that part. I wasn't even thinking very hard about it when I was writing it, I just wanted them to go to a rich bank and it seemed like the easiest way to make it happen, ha ha. Yes! You've mentioned Snatch before. I watched it a long time ago, so I don't really remember it, but I totally know what you mean! :)

Thank you so much for such a nice comment, as usual. LOVE that you like the plot. When I started writing it, I really had no idea where I was going with it, so I'm just so glad that it worked out okay.

I love Sho toooo. ;____;

♥ ♥ ♥

[deeya_ohmiya]

This was totally amazing \(^_^)/
I just finished reading both chapters , This is a really good story (^_^)...
can't wait to read another chapter (^_^)...

[primroseshows]

Thank you so much!! Your emoticons totally made me smile. I'm glad you're enjoying it!! :)