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Misplaced Trust

Apr 30, 2011 11:04

Title: Misplaced Trust
Author: Tay_21
Fandom: Primeval
Characters/Pairings: Connor/Philip Burton (non-con), mentions of Connor/Abby
Words: Chapter 1: ~1300; Chapter 2: ~ 1900
Rating/Warnings: R (non-con, torture, dark)
Disclaimer: Primeval and its characters belong to Impossible Pictures. No copyright infringement is intended.
Spoilers: Everything up to ( Read more... )

pairing: abby/connor, author: tay_21, year: 2011 spring, pairing: connor/philip burton, genre: slash, genre: het

Comments 15

prehistoriccat April 30 2011, 17:45:28 UTC

*meep*! I know you... there's more Connor whumping to come isn't there? ... think I'll be reading the next part through my fingers but hurry up and post it!

tay_21 April 30 2011, 18:28:32 UTC

Oh yes. He hasn't broken yet, and Burton is going to do just that. :-) Next part will probably be along tomorrow. Thanks for posting. I still need to cross post this to other comms.

(BTW, I will be writing a separate epilogue fic so that I can meet my person's prompt, but still give my OTP the ending I want them to have. I don't know yet if there will be actual smut involved, we'll have to see where Connor and Abby take it. ;-) )

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tay_21 April 30 2011, 19:23:22 UTC

Yep! A lot worse. Poor boy. *pets him*

Thanks for commenting. It's OK< I get overexcited with this stuff too. :-D

wilde_shade April 30 2011, 19:21:57 UTC

I am pleased. Slightly ashamed that I probably needed a pinch hitter because I requested awful things. But pleased. :D Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

tay_21 April 30 2011, 19:28:06 UTC

Don't feel bad. I've had this idea in my head for months now. :-D I quite literally jumped at the chance to write this. It gave me a brilliant reason for getting it finished.

I hope you don't mind, but I didn't go with overly graphic. I decided that if I wanted to handle this subject honestly, then I didn't want an over abundance of porny detail. Still, it's very clear exactly what is going on in the fic. I hope you like the way I handled it.

I should be posting Chapter 3 tomorrow. I'm almost done with chapter four and chapter five still needs to be typed. You should have it all by next weekend.

wilde_shade April 30 2011, 19:35:47 UTC

I don't mind at all. Probably should have worded it better in the prompt, but just dark!fic is fine. Anything graphic is welcome, but not at all necessary for me to enjoy a good, dark fic. :D

tay_21 April 30 2011, 19:42:26 UTC

That's cool. I've never really tried to write dark!fic, so I hope it meets with you're approval (I have done non-con a couple of times though, but they were Connor/Ryan slash type fics (no Ryan doesn't rape Connor or vise versa) I had been wanting to do this with a straight version of Connor though). You said a happy/hopeful ending, so that's what I went for. But he goes through a lot of bad things before he gets there. Poor boy. :-)

jaynedoll April 30 2011, 19:34:49 UTC

Excellent - I've been hoping for some more evil!Burton and Connor whumping fics so this will hit the spot nicely.

tay_21 April 30 2011, 19:37:15 UTC

I know right. Ahem... Weren't you talking about writing one???? *poke*

echo_fangirl May 1 2011, 01:06:12 UTC

Eep! Oh no! (But ooh, evil Burton and hurt Connor! Yay!)

tay_21 May 1 2011, 01:36:31 UTC

(But ooh, evil Burton and hurt Connor! Yay!) I know right! LOL! THis little bunny has been biting at me for forever and this prompt gave me the perfect excuse for me to finish writing it. :-) I'm glad you liked it.