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steamshovelmama February 13 2008, 20:58:00 UTC
Short but sweet! I was just getting into this...

I really like the details you throw about the little things that have changed, like the blanket. You create a nice sense of disorientation and alienation in Nick. I hope you're going to continue with that theme.

Looking forward to seing the rest.

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verito295 February 14 2008, 04:09:38 UTC
Happy you like it :) I was thinking that small changes would be much more difficult to deal with because one would tend to forget about them and constantly be surprised by them. Promise there will be more, even with mention of the blanket :)

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iniq February 13 2008, 21:44:59 UTC
Oh, Cutter. ;_;

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verito295 February 14 2008, 02:45:34 UTC
*pets Nick* I promise Stephen will help him get better

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seraphina_snape February 13 2008, 21:46:49 UTC
Too short! :( (I hope there'll be more soon.)

~ sera

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verito295 February 14 2008, 02:13:46 UTC
Thank you :) and promise, two more are already written and I should be working on an other tonight if the muses speak to me.

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cordeliadelayne February 13 2008, 21:54:40 UTC
Very nice. I like the detail of the changes, hope we see more soon :D

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verito295 February 14 2008, 02:12:51 UTC
Thank you :) There is more already written, just waiting for my lovely beta joereaves to poke it into shape.

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swordznsorcery February 14 2008, 00:27:09 UTC
That made me think that maybe Nick doesn’t work for the university anymore in this timeline.

It's all in the doors...

Check out their Hilux. In series one the doors had the university logo on them. Now the doors are plain.

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verito295 February 14 2008, 01:42:39 UTC
True, they are plain or they have the sort of small window thing and the general feel of steel and glass of the ARC

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