Chaptered: Week (2)

[xxxvengeancexxx]

 Tuesday

Yuichi Nakamaru straightened his tie one last time before leaving his house and rushing for the bus. When he saw it turn the corner in the distance he quickened his pace speeding down the pavement and jumping onto the bus before it pulled off.

Out of breath, he paid, took his ticket and stumbled to find a seat as the bus started moving.

Comments

[aoi_tenshi05]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yeay for update!!!! yeay for Junno!!! He made me smile as well.. I hope he can get Yucchi to talk himself out..

and I can totally understand Yuichi... I let my mind wander even with the simplest of stuff...

but it's a good start... for Koki to be invading his mind like that...

i say mooooooaaaaaaaarrr!!!! XD

[xxxvengeancexxx]

Yay! Glad you enjoyed. Junno is so much fun to write in this XD

More will be on the way!

[ueda_love1]

YEAHHHH! YOU POSTED IT!! =D
(When did i miss the first post?? O__o
haha oh wells! but im well excited xD you know
after i finshed betaing i went to read it again xD
i love it. and also i love how its so english like with the
busses! i say next the underground! ahahaaa ^^b

[xxxvengeancexxx]

YAY! I'm so happy you love it ^_^ That's nice to hear. I need to get writing the rest XD
You know, I have absolutely no idea where this is set. haha! I wirte Japanese customs and stuff but the setting is very British XD

[ueda_love1]

i know. ijust loe the mixture o the setting though! it works really well! so yeah thats
why i was like *squee*

YES GET WRITING MORE =D xD
x

[nya_shigatsu]

This is the first time I read fic about TaNaka pairing.
And I'm glad I did.
The story was slow and had a warm feeling. I don't know how to express that...It's just so nice and peaceful and it made me smile while reading.
Thank you for the great story and I'm really looking forward to the update.
Have a nice day.

[xxxvengeancexxx]

Aww thank you very much for reading.
That's very sweet of you. I like how you described it. I feel it's quite fitting ^_^