PoT Fic: Cut and Colour (InuKai, Data Pair)

[prillalar]

Triangles are pointy whichever way they turn.

Cut and Colour by Halrloprillalar
Prince of Tennis, InuKai, Data Pair. PG13, 2500 words.
They could have been together all those years and it would feel just the same.

Timeframe: Junior selection camp.

Comments

[fireblooms]

Oh, Ouch. This was beautiful and passionate. The way each boy is something different to Inui-- it was like romance versus seduction and just.. gods. It huuuurts. It's so so wonderful but it hurts. .___.
I loved the subtleness. Perfect, really. Thank you for sharing.

[prillalar]

I'm glad it came across to you like that. They really are so different -- and Inui seems to need them both. It hurts me too.

[hamburgerjack]

Oh this was so wonderful, the friendship, the love, the love that never was...

You know, because Yanagi has his own Kaidoh. He has Jackal. <3

But I really enjoy how you write...I dare say...you're one of the few InuKai writers I read...

[prillalar]

Thank you! I like all the complications, even if they make me hurt.

[pixxers]

Ah, Renji - so, so cool. I really adore their interactions and friendships and I like that you showed how torn Inui could really be.

That was beautiful, as always.

[prillalar]

I really feel sorry for Inui. It seems like he should be in the position of power here, but he's really not. And reading the comments is making me sad all over again.

[bobrhyn]

Ooh. I really liked the little things in this - the burrs, the extra 10 kg, the lists, the gifts. Mmm.

[prillalar]

Thank you. :) I really enjoy thinking of those things, especially the things in Inui and Yanagi's past.

[disutansu]

Ouch, but I hurt. XD;; I was a bit skeptical, and if it was anyone else, I would have not read this. But I did and... yeah, ouch.

*squishes you lots*

[prillalar]

I wondered if I should warn you not to read this! I hope you'll feel better soon. *squishes you back*

[disutansu]

No, no, not your fault. I'm just emotionally weak. It's dumb. XD;;