Comments | prillalar: PoT Fic: We're Havin' a Heat Wave (MomoKai)

prillalar

PoT Fic: We're Havin' a Heat Wave (MomoKai)

Aug 16, 2005 18:17

This was supposed to be Sunday Night Smut, but they just wouldn't shut up so now it's Tuesday Night Smut + Bickering.

We're Havin' a Heat Wave by Halrloprillalar
Prince of Tennis, MomoKai, R, 1600 words.
The temperature's rising, it isn't surprising.

( It's thirty-six degrees Celsius and the aircon is broken. )

momokai, fic, tenipuri

Comments 26

ee970 August 23 2005, 07:07:53 UTC

Ahh, they are such boys! Loved the sniping and how Momo was too scared to snitch any more than three beers from home. Also, this line: Home is Kaidoh's space and he doesn't want to let Momoshiro into it, not even if they wouldn't get caught. ......but then he invites him over. Lovely...and hot. :D

prillalar August 25 2005, 17:55:54 UTC

Thanks so much! I adore these two more than I can say. I hope they get to snipe at each other for years and years and years.

scoradh July 30 2006, 23:08:13 UTC

"Dumbass." Kaidoh picks up Momoshiro's t-shirt and throws it in his face. "Come on," he says. "Our aircon is working."

Score.

In more ways than one.

It's just ... such a perfect literary device? Turning around something like that. It really finishes off the piece. I wish I knew what the hell it was called. Or even what I'm talking about; it might help. All I know is that I don't know why everyone in this fandom isn't flocking to your journal.

Hmm. I must try kissing someone who smokes without first having smoked myself, to see if it's as bad as everyone makes out. :P Kaidoh doesn't seem to have too many practical objections ...

prillalar July 31 2006, 05:45:50 UTC

I don't know what to call it either. I was looking for a way to make a parallel to the beginning and also show that Kaidoh liiiiiikes Momo. *g*

I'm really glad it worked so well for you! MomoKai is a lot more popular now than it used to be. I'm not sure why it wasn't all along; it seems like such an obvious pair.

scoradh July 31 2006, 20:58:58 UTC

I'm not sure why it wasn't all along; it seems like such an obvious pair.

It's the only pairing I've ever come up with all on my own. (Very proud of that, I can't tell you ...) ♥

hungry_worm December 12 2006, 23:04:00 UTC

Love it. Love your Momo especially, but Kaidoh, too, naturally. *grins* Heatwave + boys, if said boys are Momoshiro and Kaidoh, is a winner constellation. Thanks for writing and sharing! :D

prillalar December 14 2006, 05:11:01 UTC

Yay and thank you! They're extra fun when they're sweaty and sticky. :)