"No Need to Worry" - Lord of the Rings: Aragorn/Arwen

Sep 01, 2007 02:46

Title: No Need to Worry
Fandom: Lord of the Rings
Pairing: Aragorn/Arwen
Summary: Aragorn is worried, but Arwen abates his fears.
Word Count: 545
Rating: G
Author's Notes: Post-RotK, and my first Aragorn/Arwen fic! I got this idea even before I saw the #38 drabble 'Touch' from the drabbles100 table. I might or might not post this to the comm, depending on ( Read more... )

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pridefulpenguin September 3 2007, 02:59:34 UTC
Thanks for the comment and the constructive criticism. I can always use both.

That was a bit of a problem for me, getting their language just right. I didn't want it to be a medieval-type of formal, but I wasn't about to add informal slang or Ebonics. I thought I did alright with their language, but I will take more time to look at it more in depth with the next fic I write with them, because of your comment.

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carmine_ink September 2 2007, 06:30:40 UTC
It's been ages since I've read LOTR fanfic, so this was a real treat. :) I love the way you've depicted the quiet nuances of their relationship, and it's wonderful to see elvish included in their dialogue! Oh, I've missed this... Thanks for sharing it with us!

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pridefulpenguin September 3 2007, 03:02:19 UTC
You're welcome, and thank you for the positive feedback! I'm really big on things like nuances, quirks, and neuroticisms in my characters' personalities, but especially in things like relationships. The Elvish language is full of win, so I had to include it!

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