What Makes a Family

Jan 20, 2012 11:05

Written for therealljidol 8.11 "Open Topic ( Read more... )

tara, tanner, jake, lj idol

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baxaphobia January 20 2012, 19:41:26 UTC
It certainly sounds like your brother has a good head on his shoulders. Good for him and good that he has family to support him.

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pricelessone January 21 2012, 22:32:15 UTC
Yes, he does have a great head on his shoulders. He's a really good kid. Thank you for reading!

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basric January 20 2012, 21:03:25 UTC
Parents sometimes forget all the feelings they have depression, shame, exhilaration, etc.. children and teens can feel too.

I enjoyed reading about the camaraderie in your family, well done.

Well written, too.

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pricelessone January 21 2012, 22:35:09 UTC
Thanks so much!

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jacq22 January 21 2012, 06:41:11 UTC
The way you wrote made me feel the family has hope. The solid help you all gave Tanner was heartening. A beautiful entry.

That support is so special.

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pricelessone January 21 2012, 22:35:48 UTC
Thank you so much! And thank you for reading!

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imafarmgirl January 21 2012, 16:10:05 UTC
That's neat the whole family chipped in to help with his homework project.

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pricelessone January 21 2012, 22:36:15 UTC
Thanks so much for reading.

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whipchick January 21 2012, 21:15:49 UTC
This is great - I love how your use of a strong structure takes this beyond diary entry into personal essay, with great insights for the reader! You might enjoy Anne Lamott's book Bird by Bird - not only is it an awesome book on writing, but she talks about her family in a way I think you'd appreciate.

I'm going to go call my brother now :)

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pricelessone January 21 2012, 22:37:27 UTC
Thank you so much for this comment. It's so inspiring to know how our writing impacts each other in this community. It really makes me happy.

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