That fucking ending, though. I actually went OUCH when he said that to her, and her ache and adjfhnasfkjnasjdnfa. THE WANT. I just......I CAN'T WATI FOR MORE BECAUSE YOU'RE KILLING ME AND I LIKE IT.
These two are so broken and unfix-able at times that I don't want them to have anything to do with each other. But they have to and I can't wait to read what's in store for them.
Also, I'm interested to read on how the team's new experience will bring into this job. All seemed worsed off than before. Thanks for sharing the fic. I look forward to more :)
This fic is soooooo beautiful! These two are delicious with their angst and their sex and then more angst and then some fluff to fool you and then more angst and then more sex and more angst. GAH you're just so talented and this plot is extremely interesting and original. <3
I love the plotting and the general sense of unease you've worked in through the whole thing, from the little moments with Arthur refusing to open up to Saito being.... Saito. And I love the voice you've got for Ariadne. Confident but confused, as anyone would be, and fully aware that she's not making the best decisions.
I really enjoyed this chapter. I like that Arthur and Ariadne's relationship is complicated and that Arthur in particular is really messed up. I also like how you're writing Yusuf and Eames; it's a nice change to see Yusuf enjoying the night life and I love it when Eames is a selfish bastard - it's much more in-keeping with the film.
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That fucking ending, though. I actually went OUCH when he said that to her, and her ache and adjfhnasfkjnasjdnfa. THE WANT. I just......I CAN'T WATI FOR MORE BECAUSE YOU'RE KILLING ME AND I LIKE IT.
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Also, I'm interested to read on how the team's new experience will bring into this job. All seemed worsed off than before. Thanks for sharing the fic. I look forward to more :)
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<3
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I love the plotting and the general sense of unease you've worked in through the whole thing, from the little moments with Arthur refusing to open up to Saito being.... Saito. And I love the voice you've got for Ariadne. Confident but confused, as anyone would be, and fully aware that she's not making the best decisions.
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Update soon!
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