one foot on the ground [lost]

[weatheredlaw]

Title: one foot on the ground
Fandom: LOST
Summary: If you really wanted to kill me, I'd already be dead.
Pairing: Ben/Ilana
Rating: R
Notes: Benana! And fic. Been in a writing slump lately. Requests on their way.

Comments

[flaky_artist]

I love this. The dialogue is perfect ("You can have me." <3), and the tone and flow of the narrative is wonderful.

Of course he's sorry. Of course he is. Aren't they all? Isn't she? Hasn't she been sorry for her entire life?

This whole paragraph is beautiful, and breaks my heart. Gorgeous work, hun.

[weatheredlaw]

Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed. I've had some writer's block lately.

[sgreaves3490]

I'm in love with this and I just found your journal (I am a complete technophobe). How have I never read this stuff before, oh my God! PLEASE write more Ben fanfic, you are amazing!!

[weatheredlaw]

I'm really glad you liked it. :) More on the way.