up to our throats in knives

Jul 13, 2010 11:16

Title: up to our throats in knives
Fandom: LOST
Summary: She never meant for them to make this mess.
Pairing: Ben/Kate
Rating: R
Notes: For knopflergroupie who wanted the word antagonism on her queen-day at lostsquee and likes rare pairings.

that's why i have you )

character: kate austen, character: ben linus, pairing: ben & kate, rating: r, fiction: lost, category: lostsqueeluau2010

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anna_salem July 13 2010, 18:40:28 UTC
Excellent. A bit chilling and perfectly in-character.

Kate is so difficult to work out. She doesn't...talk about what's bothering her. She's a very physical woman. In place of working out what she wants or needs, she often times jumped Jack or Sawyer. It got dizzying.

So I could definitely see her fucking Ben just to prevent him from disturbing whatever little life she's made for herself post-island.

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weatheredlaw July 13 2010, 18:56:18 UTC
Thank you very much! I agree, she's definitely a very physical creature. I could so see her hanging onto whatever, or whoever, just to keep the life she has.

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knopflergroupie July 13 2010, 20:10:17 UTC
Every word of this is gorgeous but this:

In her dreams, he's standing off to the side with buckets of blood and dust and nothing to say.

It's not really all that different when she's awake.

is stunning. I love this so much. It's dark and depressing and desperate and a little creepy, in a way, as this pairing just is. Justifying Ben/Kate seems like it would be difficult, but you do it well and it's so addicting. Thank you so much for this wonderful piece!

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weatheredlaw July 13 2010, 20:22:46 UTC
You're very welcome! I always had a hard time imagining it, but lately it seems like it just FITS somehow. I don't know why. I'm really glad you liked it and I enjoyed writing it for you! Ben/Kate is always fun to write these days.

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knopflergroupie July 13 2010, 20:30:42 UTC
I've been meaning to try out Ben/Kate, even though it really frightens me because they seem like very intimidating characters to write. Are going to be queen at some point for the Luau, and request something that would give me an excuse to write Ben/Kate? 'Cause that would be awesome.

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weatheredlaw July 13 2010, 20:41:06 UTC
I am going to be queen, yes. July 26th. My prompt is going to be...not pairing specific. I was going to force everyone to give me Ben/Ilana, but I decided to be a kinder queen. But you will definitely get a chance to write them on my day if you wish.

Don't be intimidated by them! You only get better at writing characters or learn to write them by trying, and you've got a lot of good stuff. I know I enjoy the things you write a lot! I'm sure Ben/Kate would be a cinch for you. :)

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