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[prettysirenx]

Chloe couldn’t believe the words popped out of her mouth so effortlessly. She just offered to cut open Rush’s chest in a moment of panic and take out the tracking device. Granted, it wouldn’t be her - there would be an actual surgeon in her body - but still. The room was tense after she offered, but Young agreed to it.

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Comments

[samcarter1022]

I like this one, it should have been in the show. It's just a little insight into the connection developing between Chole and Rush and it adds something to her doing the surgery for him.

[prettysirenx]

Thanks! I'm glad you like it. =) Missing moments always make me the most nervous for some reason, because you actually gotta make sure you remember stuff about the episode. haha

[samcarter1022]

LOL that's true, I have them all saved on my PVR so I just go back and re-watch:):) I think you did a great job though:)

[prettysirenx]

lol I have them saved too, but I've already rewatched the episode so many times, my mother thinks I'm damaged. (She was awake all night, so it wasn't like I could rewatch without her knowing.)

[prettysirenx]

High praise indeed! Thank you!! =) I'm glad I got the emotion right. It was too tempting to push it farther, but I held back because I wanted to keep it somewhat true to the moment.

[trekkiesara]

that was great! Missing moments are some of my favorites if done well, and this one was. Very nice.

[prettysirenx]

Why, thank you! I'm glad you liked it. =D

[trekkiesara]

I've been having a crappy time at work lately and your stories have been making me have something to look forward to when I get home. :-)

[prettysirenx]

Awwws, I'm glad I can help brighten your days. =)I know what it's like to work at a crappy job. Here in Alabama, they can fire you for no reason and without explanation; I've had to work 14 hour shifts without bathroom breaks or food because of that -- no fun.