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Feb 15, 2006 16:10

Title: Pinot (2/?) in the lady_aurora series ( Read more... )

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Hello faramirgirl February 16 2006, 01:01:12 UTC

Well that was so sweet of David to cook dinner for Orlando and after that LOL that was just so funny, I would just see Orlando face when David bought up the popsicle thingy. LOL that was just so cute.

Re: Hello prettypattisue February 16 2006, 02:23:21 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! I don't often write Orlando, so I'm relieved he was believable. Thanks.

v_angelique February 16 2006, 03:03:01 UTC

Nice! Dom talking to the popsicle in the first part was my favourite..

prettypattisue February 16 2006, 04:04:14 UTC

Me too! Poor popsicle. *snorts* Hopefully I will find more opportunities for some Dom... he's so much fun to write.

pj1lycanfreak February 16 2006, 04:19:13 UTC

this is the first time i have seen a David/Orlando pairing. It looks like it will be interesting. i just read popsicle and now this and it sure looks like a good start to a very interesting story indeed. looking forward to the next part.

prettypattisue February 16 2006, 05:07:28 UTC

Thanks! You'll have to credit Aurora with the pairing, though -- I wrote it as a request for her. (She also wanted smut, which I promise I'm working toward.)

pj1lycanfreak February 16 2006, 05:16:42 UTC

Well, I am looking forward to that part too you know *grins wickedly and licks lips in anticipation*

prettypattisue February 16 2006, 05:27:10 UTC

Heh! The thing is, I know what's going to happen in the bedroom. It's just taking forever to get there! Stupid plot set up. *grumbles*

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obselizabeth February 16 2006, 16:50:56 UTC

“Well, there you go. That’s your problem - a real cock wouldn’t break off in your mouth, would it?”

“No,” Orlando said slowly, his eyes going dark. “No, I guess it wouldn’t.”

hell, woman! don't stop there! *anxious for another update*

and if you're ever looking for another beta.....*winks*

prettypattisue February 16 2006, 21:29:42 UTC

I'll try to uodate soon! I've got some other things in the pipeline as well. And I'll definitely let you know if I want to surprise Michelle. :)

uinendolothen February 17 2006, 00:17:02 UTC

*dies*

That was positively brilliant!!!!! What an amazingly wonderful suprise to see this on my f-list :)

*squishes you*

That’s your problem - a real cock wouldn’t break off in your mouth, would it?

*dies some more*

prettypattisue February 17 2006, 07:12:54 UTC

Yes, well, I'm still psyching myself up for the smut, as you did want rimming. But I was hoping this would tide you over for a little bit...
*Hugs*