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prettyorianna

[fic] The Things We Can't Control - Chapter 15 ~Going Home~

Aug 15, 2012 19:20

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fic: things we can't control, fic: ongoing, genre: drama, warning: violent, warning: rape / non-con, genre: crime, warning: character death, genre: dark, fic: multi-chapter, warning: graphic, pairing: akame, genre: au, genre: smut, rating: nc-17

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prettyorianna August 16 2012, 15:02:57 UTC

And that's not commenting on it LOL?

I'm teasing.

Poor Jin... he's entirely too in tune with Kame already. He doesn't realize it but he is.

And Kame needs a stern lecture on the merits of taking better care of himself.

But I admit, I really liked that scene where Jin carries him. LOL

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prettyorianna August 18 2012, 00:51:36 UTC

Isn't it, though? LOL I can sooo picture it.

miradawn August 16 2012, 03:50:44 UTC

LOL, I agree with Koki that Jin's a keeper.Making Kame go to sleep will probably help him think clearer too.

Aww the chapter was fine.I hope your cat scratch get better.

Great Update!Good Luck!

prettyorianna August 16 2012, 15:05:37 UTC

Yeah the scratch is sooo annoying. Starts about two fingers' width from the center of the palm and goes halfway up the pinky. Such an inconvenient place LOL.

I did have fun writing this chapter even so LOL

I'm glad you like it. It'll probably be a couple of days before I have another update for this 'cause I'm working on UP update now.

kame_bemu August 16 2012, 04:19:14 UTC

The scene with Jin carrying Kazuya made this chapter truly worth it.I guess it's not how long but how fun the chap is that make it worthy to read.Had fun reading this one.Like Koki aid,they ought to keep Jin,haha!Looking fwd to the next chap.

Poor cat.I guess there's no place like home.

prettyorianna August 16 2012, 15:19:58 UTC

That part really was fun to write. I just like the image. Plus Kame's, "Get back here! I'm not done yelling at you!" just makes me laugh.

Anyway, next update will be UP so it'll be couple of days on an update for this. I don't have a lot of time to write today but I'll do my best to not make you guys wait longer.

mae0513 August 16 2012, 04:35:25 UTC

Thanks for the update and sharing~

prettyorianna August 16 2012, 15:20:54 UTC

YOu're welcome! I'm glad you liked it (^_^)

wonotice August 16 2012, 09:09:30 UTC

Hmm cats are evil, one day they'll take over the world
Just you wait
XD
I love the Akame interaction here
It's just so sweet, and the arguing just makes it better
Because there's nothing better than a love-hate relationship lol
Thanks for sharing ♥

prettyorianna August 16 2012, 15:26:06 UTC

I think my cat is more "special" than evil. Seriously, she's about as lacking in common sense as I am. Actually, sometimes she seems really clever and sometimes she seems really... um... "special" so...

Yeah, I'm having a lot of fun with the love-hate relationship building between those two. I mean, it can get to be a bit much, though... I try to write a scene and then, oops, they're arguing again!

I'm glad you liked the update. Gotta tend to UP next but I'll try to not make you guys wait too long for this update.