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[fic] The Things We Can't Control - Prologue

Jul 09, 2012 22:02

Title: The Things We Can't Control
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fic: things we can't control, fic: ongoing, genre: drama, warning: violent, warning: rape / non-con, genre: crime, warning: character death, genre: dark, fic: multi-chapter, warning: graphic, pairing: akame, genre: au, genre: smut, rating: nc-17

Comments 26

pinkporca July 10 2012, 11:03:08 UTC

Don't say the prologue sucked because it sure didn't. I was so intriguing that I already wanted chapters 1 through the end. But I have to be patient. You did a great job with this and with everything you write. Looking forward to this new fiction. Thank you for sharing.

prettyorianna July 10 2012, 17:13:17 UTC

LOL I just meant that the things that happen in it are horrible things to have happen. I wasn't dissing the writing :)

But even so, I'm grateful for what you said :) You're always so nice to me :)

I've got about 1000 words on TWCC's first chapter so I'm just waiting to sort some stuff out with joatex. In the meanwhile, I'm working on UP next chapter so that should be up sometime today (probably earlier today than I usually get 'em posted).

Always glad to hear from you pinkporca :)

kame_bemu July 11 2012, 05:06:34 UTC

Kinda guessed the boy to be Kazuya.So sad to see a child being deprived his childhood.Want to kick the father's ass so much.Will be waiting for chap 1.

prettyorianna July 11 2012, 13:21:58 UTC

Poor kid :(

You'll find out who he is eventually.

In any event, I'm off to post chapter one :) Thanks for commenting :)

las_dulces July 11 2012, 15:37:31 UTC

Thanks for sharing.
I like this one.
Kinda wonder what will happen to both of them in this fic.

prettyorianna July 11 2012, 18:32:19 UTC

That would be telling LOL But I'll do my best to keep it interesting and not disappoint :)

paoktsou December 16 2012, 18:20:33 UTC

It's been a long time since i've read an akame fic !!
starting yours !! so intresting !!!
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Thanks for writing akame ^o^ !! gosh i miss them so much T.T

prettyorianna December 16 2012, 18:39:22 UTC

Akame's my favorite pairing (^_^) I think it always will be no matter how much time passes. But I miss 'em too.

going_dangerous January 31 2013, 01:46:57 UTC

This was so well written, that I felt the boy's pain. This fic caught my attention long before, but I just couldn't find the time to start reading it. Now I regret it. I want to read more. <3

prettyorianna January 31 2013, 06:10:20 UTC

You know, this wasn't what I meant to write at all. I had this idea for a funny story where two bank robbers show up at the same bank both intending to rob it. But instead this came out and somehow I knew it was the same story and that there was a lot more to this project than originally envisioned.

But I don't mind LOL. I like this project. Well, sometimes. Other times, I hate what I'm doing to the characters.

going_dangerous January 31 2013, 11:34:41 UTC

I think it's the best when a story somehow has like a mind of its own, as if it would guide you to write it and not the other one around. That gives us a lot to explore. I like this project of your too, even if I think that sometimes you're pretty cruel. LOL