[fic] The Things We Can't Control - Chapter 90 ~Brothers~

[prettyorianna]

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[joatex]

The twins have a point Kame really should tell Yurina about Papa K kidnapping her daughter. Though I understand why Kame is hesitating in doing so...

Thanks for the update (n_n)

[prettyorianna]

Well, he just found out that morning and it's not that he doesn't want to tell her it was Papa K so much as it is him not wanting her to know that it was his father.

But either way, he'll have to tell her something.

I'll try not to make you guys wait so long for updates.

[kaze_no_hisui]

poor kazuya, he's worry if yurina will hate him when he told her that news T_T

and really surprised when hear 'shuta' from shibata, never expect that that's them and so glad they can be friend in the future ^^

[prettyorianna]

Teehee, I was so hoping you guys wouldn't put it together that Shibata Takeshi is the same Takeshi as in Shuta's brother in the present chapters. This way I was able to surprise you guys. Though originally, there were other present!characters who were going to be revealed in the past sooner than Shuta but then I ran into the "OMG How can Kame follow her around for weeks if she's driving" problem and had to bump him forward.

[tat_fan_luv]

Yea! the twins are back...hmm I love those too so much! Poor Kame, this is so hard on him I don't blame him in the least. Papa K is a monster i just wanna, i wanna....I don't know but I'll figure it out and let you know lol, hope your husband feels better and thanks for the amazing chapter, this story just keeps getting better and better!

[prettyorianna]

Hubby is doing much better, thanks!

LOL I know that Papa K isn't behind ALL of the bad stuff that ever happens in the story, but what he does do is enough that am still trying to plot the perfect punishment for him and despairing that there is no fate worse enough. IF you do come up with something, I'm behind it 100%!

[pinkporca]

Yes! an update. I had no clue that the shibata of the prison is the same in the present chapters. So glad that they are "friends" and that the brothers are under Kizuna. Hope your hubbie feels better.

[prettyorianna]

Yeah, I was trying my best to not draw attention to the fact that Shibata's name is Takeshi and also that I didn't accidentally use the surname even once in the present!chapters, ever since the Meeting with the Murder chapter when Kame first talked to him in the past.

Hubby's doing better (^_^) /hi5?

[mae0513]

Yay~

new update!

thanks for sharing~

[prettyorianna]

You welcome! I hope you enjoyed it ^(^