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[fic] The Things We Can't Control - Chapter 83 ~The Fire and The Blood~

Mar 15, 2013 00:03

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fic: ongoing, genre: tragedy, genre: crime, genre: dark, genre: romance, genre: smut, fic: things we can't control, genre: drama, warning: violent, pairing: junda, warning: rape / non-con, warning: character death, fic: multi-chapter, warning: graphic, pairing: akame, genre: au, rating: nc-17

Comments 19

joatex March 15 2013, 05:32:24 UTC

My god Kame's dream was scary.... (o_O)

Maru covered in blood and not his. He still in shock...poor Maru. Glad he not hurt though. I completely agree with Kame on not getting Maru mad.... *shivers*

Thanks for the update (n_n)

prettyorianna March 15 2013, 05:40:26 UTC

Yeah, I think I rewrote that dream like four times. LOL but if it's scary, I got it right I guess (^_^)

Maru sort of hijacked my second scene, though. I hadn't intended him to show up yet but then I was writing it and it just sort of seemed like the right place so I went with it.

Well, hopefully, I will have another update ready in the next day or so. I'm trying to not lose my drive (^_^)b

kaze_no_hisui March 15 2013, 05:56:05 UTC

scary nightmare, poor kazuya > < and they got interupted again XPPP what happen at maru's shop really make me curious but looks like papa K is getting active on his plan and kizuna still don't know what his plan is >

prettyorianna March 16 2013, 05:56:10 UTC

Next present chapter will mostly be Jin and Maru, so we'll find out exactly what happened, or at least what Maru will admit happened.

Though I guess next we go back to the past. Kame's part-time job, Yurina's pregnancy, all that jazz (^_^)b

dilovesyunjae March 15 2013, 08:01:54 UTC

you make me crave for moreeeeee...

prettyorianna March 16 2013, 05:56:45 UTC

You make me want to write more to keep you haaaaaaaaappy.....

LOL but seriously, I'm happy you like the story and I'll get to work on more for you!

pinkporca March 15 2013, 11:17:03 UTC

What a nightmare. It was really scary. Wish Kame would confide in Jin so he could get release his stress by talking it out. Can't wait for Maru's story line. Thanks for the update.

prettyorianna March 16 2013, 05:59:32 UTC

Yeah, Kame really needs to just tell Jin everything. But he's afraid. Though I think if he keeps having those nightmares, he won't really have a choice. He'll have to tell him because Jin won't let him be until he does.

Anyways, back to work LOL Will not have the update up tonight but maybe Saturday night.

las_dulces March 15 2013, 11:58:15 UTC

Thanks for the update.
It's hard for me to imagine Maru in that situation.

prettyorianna March 16 2013, 06:00:44 UTC

LOL Well, so far you've just seen happy Maru. Unhappy Maru is... different. You'll find out better in CHapter 85.

Anyways, better get to work on that next update!