[fic] The Things We Can't Control - Chapter 80 ~Dealing~

[prettyorianna]

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[dilovesyunjae]

Iduno if I wana strangle you or myself. LOL. Ohh. Kame would make a great uncle.

[prettyorianna]

Can't strangle me. I'm in my Fireman's Axe-Proof Mobile Armor Unit (I call it Bob) so you can't get me! Muahahaha!

Seriously, though... I wanted so much to tell you all that he wasn't really dead. I mean, the knowledge was just there and I guess it's the same way Akira and Aoi felt at not being able to tell Yurina and Kame yet because they didn't have a phone.

Kame would make a great uncle indeed (^_^)b

[romapi]

see I told you so. XD

Thank you for sharing and updating.

[prettyorianna]

Yup yup, you did tell me LOL

[exbenjamin]

Youuuuuuuu!!! You made us believe akira is dead!! That was soo horrible to accept that he died!!

I have to admit you got me! Even though i noticed that you wrote "them" in a previous chapter i still thought he was gone!!

Thanks for bringing him back!!! I'm so happy he's not dead!!!! XD

[prettyorianna]

Hey, I didn't "bring him back" 'cause he was never gone LOL Just a little coma-fied.

I am sorry for tricking you all like that. I had good reasons, though. His "death" set certain things in motion and also pushed other stuff over the edge that were so close to happening but needed a nudge. But he couldn't stay dead because I need him in the present chapters. This was the best I could do.

[silent_inori]

Akira's alive! Yay! I think my jaw dropped as well when he came into the room! I'm so happy! Yes you are really mean, but you had us all fooled! You made a lot of us cry, but I'm so happy now! So does this mean, in the next chapter, Jin will get to meet both Aoi and Akira? Yay! Hope the twins get to tease Kame and Jin as well! ;D

I'm also glad that Takeshi apologized. Maybe he was touched with Kame's story. Just goes to show the power of Kame's "light". I guess Takeshi also saw that in Kame so he believed him.

Poor Yurina, but since she's got a strong support system (Kame and her brothers), she will get through this. I remember a chapter where Yurina asked Kame "where she might be now?" or something like that, I guess she was talking about her daughter then?! Fufufu~

I love this chapter! Please continue writing! :D

[prettyorianna]

Yup, he gets to meet both of them. I was very careful in chapter 79 to say "the prison" instead of to "see the twins" or "to see Aoi" so I could do this and not contradict myself (^_^)

Takeshi's not so bad. Just misguided. But yeah, he saw Kame's light and then when everyone thought Akira was dead, in no small part due to his condition from the beating they gave him, that guilt along with Kame's fierceness and shine made him reevaluate.

About the Yurina stuff, that would be telling. LOL You'll have to wait and see.

I'm glad you like the chapter (^_^) I don't know if I'll have one this weekend or not. But if not, then soon after.

[joatex]

Oh my God he's alive!!!!! Evil!!!! Your so evil!!! Went through torture and sadness for nothing!!!! You better be well protected you've made my list. (>_<)

I noticed the hints but I wasn't able to put it all together. I just thought you made a mistake or something. Grrrrr!!!!!!!!!

I'm so glad he's not dead and that both are okay *cries in happiness*

Thanks for the update. (n_n)

[prettyorianna]

It wasn't for nothing. I had reasons LOL but I'm not going to list them. I'd rather you see them in the story fitting naturally without having to bother thinking, "Ah, that's why she had to do that, so this would..." and so on. You should see the story all fitting together right, not the steps I had to take to make it do so LOL

Though I'm positively affronted you thought I made a mistake (okay not really, just teasing, on extreme sugar high too much candy!! LOL).

Anyways, I'll try to have an update soon, but it might be a couple days.