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prettykitty_fic

objects in mirror (are closer than they appear) [girl!spencer/ryan]

Jan 13, 2009 13:25

objects in mirror (are closer than they appear)
2129 // pg // girl!spencer/ryan
[A/N: continuation of hesitate, then move forward, also late (as per usual)]
[Prompt: 2lineschallenge 2008 ]
[Beta: cloudlessclimes, sobota, -stele3]

well the problem's getting big
and it's a compact car
Old 97's, won't be home

( Ryan hasn't said a word to Spencer in two days. )

fic band: p!atd, fic type: bandslash, fic pairing: spencer/ryan, fic challenge: 2lines

Comments 16

yetunknown February 23 2009, 04:55:53 UTC

this is perfect. it hurts and makes me smile and everything in between. I love Jon's pov.

Jon doesn't want to think about the look in Brendon's eyes, not right now anyway, so he slides into his own bunk.
and that line hit just the right spot.

prettykitty_aya February 23 2009, 05:15:52 UTC

thank you! sooner or later, i'll get around to the other two parts :D

anonymous January 24 2011, 12:38:58 UTC

I really quite love this story. The conflicts of feelings. How Ryan is both jealous and protective over Spencer. And how Spencer did it because she couldn't very well wait for Ryan forever. :( And then Jon and Brendon. And just...ugh. Very lovely.

Curious. Were you able to get around on writing the next part? :/? I would love to read and comment on them.

prettykitty_fic January 24 2011, 13:07:14 UTC

I hadn't yet, but I do have notes to write two more pieces to this - one from Brendon's POV and one from Ryan's. It's been a bit weird since I started this series before the breakup and the sequels actually take that into account. So, to me, they're a little bit more difficult to piece together, I think. (Also, I got distracted by all the big bangs last year, lol.)

Thank you so much for taking the time to comment and let me know what you thought. It's always very much appreciated! :)