A complication: chapter 5

[pretty_sailor]

Five feeble and almost silent hours had past and three times had the same tree stood in front of the boys on their horses. Merlin, who had remained silent until the third sighting, out of awareness of the prince’s temper, could not hold back his comment now.

“We’re lost, aren’t we?”

The prince answered with a scowl, jerking his horse to a stop, and

Comments

[kuhekabir]

this was a very good update...more?

[pretty_sailor]

Chapter 6 up now, thanks for your comment! Glad you're enjoying it :)

[ravenclawwit]

This whole story is just awesome so far. Anxiously awaiting more! :-)

[pretty_sailor]

Yay, thanks :D I'm trying to get to the actual romance but I keep thinking of other things to build up to it. I'll get there eventually :P

[ravenclawwit]

I think it's great. I like the slow build up, plus it's clear that what's happening in the story has a purpose, you're not just giving us a bunch of filler before the smex, xD. Keep up the great work! :-)

[pretty_sailor]

Aww, thanks for that, I'm so happy you're liking the actual story aswell, I started off just wanting to write some MerlinxArthur stuff but I got distracted... lol :D Will update soon!

[newkidfan]

This is all very delicious so far, and I'm looking forward to the rest of your story. :)

[pretty_sailor]

Thank you! I hope you enjoy chapter 6, though it didn't turn out quite how I wanted it to... oh well, there's always chapter 7 to come!

[duskwillow]

This story is amazing, can't wait for more!

[pretty_sailor]

Thanks :D First time I've posted two chapters in one night, I'm on a roll! lol, hope you enjoy!